| "Ryou's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Title: *wipes forehead*
Reviewed By: Shut_Down_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 11:42 CST
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Whew! Finally done. Just thought I'd tell you that ^_^ Guess I'll email you now!
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (NLI) On: October 22, 2006 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh heh, I loved those last two lines, "'A little carried away? A little?' Ryou repeated in disbelief. 'A little... are you mental?' / 'Oh, I'm not finished with you yet.' Bakura whispered his promise in Ryou's ear." Heh, sado/masochism at it's extreme, well as long as it's consensual, whatever. XD And a mixture of emotions throughout the ch, anger, violence, compassion? , and a tinge of sadness. I'm glad Yuugi finally got it, even if only a little late and still disbelieving. Well, I'm glad for the update! ^^ An intriguing ch. I know I needed that; I'm just going crazy here with all this work. @_@ I need a vacation, a seriously relaxing one. lol. Well, hope to see you update soon, til then. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress NLI On: July 19, 2006 18:48 CDT
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^___^ I'm loving this chapter, smexy sado-masochistic lemon, hehehe. ^^ Yummy! And a lovely ch it was, passionate kissing right in front of everyone. I'm glad Yami figured it out, but too bad for Yuugi I guess. He needs to figure it out or at least come to believe what everyone's saying. Anyways, I'm so happy you updated!!! I'm definitely looking forward to the next installment, hopefully soon. Till then, see ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh, You have to update soon! :] I can't beileve Yugi and Y.Yugi (and that posse) are that dense. So I see how they could think that, but gah. I cant remember where I was going with that. But I can't wait to see what Ryou and Baku do to shove the truth into their faces. n.n; I hope it's risque` or even rauncy. Gotta push those prom rule limits. It's just what Bakura does. B) &&puhweese don't make us wait that long for an update. T~T;;;;;
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 13:39 CST
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I love it!!!! Continue soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (NLI) On: March 18, 2006 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*jumps for joy* An update!!! Whee! I love this story, it's so freakin awesome. An evil cliffie though, *pouts* can't wait to see what Ryou's going to do next. hehehe. And what's this thing w/a secret and Mariku...eh...very intriguing. lol. Anyways, I hope to see the next installment soon. Til then. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Himitsu Dorobou On: March 15, 2006 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey-lo. *grins a tad* Soooo...major cliffhanger, ne. *mock-pouts* So unfair--I hate cliffies. The grammar and all was good, by the way...even though you didn't have the marvelous me checking it out. *winks* Ah, but now I'm all curious...wah. Think you'll be writing more soon? I'll be on a lot again, so if you still want me to beta, I'm up for it. ^^0 And I swear I won't take ages either. Anyway...here's to hoping Yuugi gets a black eye or some such. *laughs* See ya.
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Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: March 14, 2006 15:54 CST
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*chokes* nasty, NASTY cliffhanger! I liked it, though somewhere you spelled 'shirt' as 'shit' which made me giggle.
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Reviewed By: Kikyo Jagashi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 10:22 CDT
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your story is great please write more
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Title: Yes
Reviewed By: BiBoo On: September 18, 2005 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED!! please update soon....if you have any intention of doing so :D I love your story!!!
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 07:22 CST
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*bows down* you are the supreme write of my farorites list (only one on my list but that doesn't matter) I really love this fic and I wish you would update if you had time/interest I think that Bakura should wear black ^-^
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Title: its meh...again...
Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Hi HI~! This chapter was wonderful^_^...but ...but...why!? Why did Malik have to die? ok...so he was a real dickwad... >.>but still... U_U; Anyway~!! I like how you made Anzu kinda outta character. You actually made her pretty decent! *appaluds* *waves BXR banner* I cant wait for the next installment!
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Title: lemme try this again...^^;
Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I heart YOU! You updated! 2X even! I cant wait to read the next capter! Youll hear from me again in a few minutes. :3 Are there gonna be any more scenes that involve Bakura's favorite blade? (which is now MY favorite too xD)
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I >
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 08:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue soon. I think Ryou should wear white and Bakura wear black.
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