| "Ryou's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 00:00 CST
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AH MY GOD! YOU KILLED HIM! HE'S DEAD! [Clutches Malik's corpse] And Marik doesn't even care! [weep weep] WHY!?
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 21:26 CST
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O_O Y-you killed Hikari-pretty... and even though Bakura probably knows tons of odd and sadistic and quick ways to kill ppl, I highly doubt that he could rip out a heart w/ his bare hands. And ur evil, making readers wait to find out Ryou's horrible secret!! Is it super-bad, like hooker stuff? And Bakura's suit should be... black, so then the blood doesn't show up as easily. I think he'd just look weird in white... with blood stains. That inspires me for fanart...ja ne!
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Reviewed By: slacker17 On: February 01, 2005 11:46 CST
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Black and red
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in) On: January 31, 2005 23:27 CST
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Oh yeah, and one more thing. Bakura should wear black, cuz he's looks great in that color. Once again, well written chapters. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in) On: January 31, 2005 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why oh why did Marik and Malik have to do that, my 2nd and third fav. bishonens betrayed my two top favs! *sobs* I guess I'll live with it. lol. Anyways, I loved both chapters. But so evil, Ryou's secret is still kept hidden to the readers. You have one great mom, that also write very well. ^_^ I also praise you for making Anzu quite likeable in the story. I'm very glad they're together again, now they can f*** each other senseless again. lol. Me and my hentai ideas. ^_^; But I'm not the only one. lol. Write more soon, see ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: paniwi (not logged in) On: January 31, 2005 15:36 CST
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YOU AND YOUR MUM ARE EVIL Now I still don't know what Ryou's secret is, grr. Your lucky with a mum like yours though. Ok on with what is supposed to be constructive criticism (I suck in that) It was a beautiful chapter, with good characterasations (so much for criticism ne?) and I think Baku-chan should where a red suit, so he can use it later cause the blood that undoubtley will come on it won't be noticed that much ^_^ anyway, plz update soon
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 15:46 CST
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I loved it--angsty goodness!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 14:40 CST
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T_T Nooooooo... m-my other 2 fave b-bishonens... HOW COULD THEY BETRAY BAKU AND RYOU-CHAN?!?! This totally goes beyond the Code of the Bishonen... *sobs in a corner, then coughs* Ahem, anyway, how can they have a 2nd 1st date when they've never really been on a date... haven't they? Hmm... well, cya!
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Reviewed By: anbuiset(to lazy to log in) On: January 25, 2005 17:56 CST
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I love this soo much, don`t let Marik and Malik keep them apart. I love Ryou/Bakura.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess suffers from laziness On: January 25, 2005 16:48 CST
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OOoh.. not boring, I like gore! ^^ Second first date sounds good. =3. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 04:13 CST
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don't worry, the chapter wasn't boring, it was cool. Poor Baku-chan, good thing he got to cool himself down in that ally-way. Less scum for the world, if only he could kill Marik and *trails off, imagining slow and painful deaths*
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Title: *gasp*
Reviewed By: LPGurl (2 lazy 2 log in) On: January 24, 2005 23:30 CST
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Awww! This is soo cute! I'm wondering when are you gonna update Ryou's Series of Misfortunate events? I love that fic!!! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in) On: January 23, 2005 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHH! THAT. WAS. SO. Incredibly. MEAN!!! Marik...and...Malik...WHAT?!?!?!?!?! WTF?!?! How can they do that to Ryou and Bakura?!?!?!?!*calms self down* Ok, that was just very cruel of them and I don't know what their motive(s) is(are). But yeah, a very unsuspected twist, in other words the story is awesome! lol. I so need to catch up reading ff here, that's why this review is like so late. -_-;;; Well, you better write more soon, please?
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Title: ().o
Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE FINISH!!!!! I need more~!!!That was great! It hit the spot like a good piece of pie.^____^ No, I dont hate you yet for the cliff hangerness...but that fake ending scared the piss out of me. Bring on the blood sadism and lemons~! I'm ready for more!
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Reviewed By: cas On: January 11, 2005 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooh! this was REALLY good an very sexy! plz update as soon as possible! don torture me!!!!!!!
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