| "Entwined Symphony" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: akuaku On: May 26, 2009 07:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this was one of my absolute favorite SasuNaru fanfics! You are great at manipulating the storyline into SasuNaru ♥
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Reviewed By: RawBlister On: March 27, 2006 05:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god....I love this story to BITS!!! I can't believe how well you've written it! The sheer detail you've placed on Naruto's perspective is one of the things I admire most. Not to mention, of course, the fluffy goodness that surrounds it too. ^___^ Honestly, everything in here makes me smile and feel warm inside. You've portrayed Naruto's feelings with awesome precision and if I really could alter his past with Sasuke, there wouldn't be a better way to do it. Their friendship is so adorable and if this had happened, maybe Sasuke wouldn't be as power hungry as he is right now. Anyhow, I really hope to see Part 3 soon even if it'll take awhile. I know it'd be worth the wait! Your writing style is beautiful.
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Title: *sob*
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cried in several chappies. So pweez update more cuz I've neva cried this much in my life and I love the feeling. so lol update soon! I GIVE U 100000000000000000000 OUT OF 100000000000000000000 He-he
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 03:03 CST
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Kawaii. Now what happens? Keep up the good work. coolsa.
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Reviewed By: Shuukaku On: November 13, 2004 18:09 CST
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=D That's adorable.
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Reviewed By: Chocobo Of Faded Memories [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOWWW! I just LOVE this story! It's sooo sweet! I love chibi SasuNaru stories!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Phsycobratt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is really good. No spelling or grammar mistakes that I could find; though I wasn't really looking. Style of writing was okay, better than most. It was creative, not original because there are alot - well maybe not alot - of stories that base around the same thing. But the way you wrote was original. It was fun to read, I think you caught Naruto's personality perfectly. Sasuke was a little bit colder than I pictured he'd be as a kid. Then again, he was always trying to catch up to Itachi. Well, anyway, it was great. Please take your time with the next chapter - if there is one - I wouldn't want you to ruin your story by rushing.
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