Reviewed By: Katdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 14:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Jeez, I would hate the pharoah too... Actually that was really well written, with a few minor mistakes with grammar. The story itself, I think, is off to a good start. I'm hoping that you continue it, and don't give up on it. Your writing could take this story very far if you kept at it. Good luck. ~~Kat
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