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Reviewed By: Calcifer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2009 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
And a giant tackle hug to you, because you live(d) in Canada. Long live Tim Horton's! Really interesting fic. I like the contrast with how much stuff they each brought and how it's implied that each thing has a lot of meaning. Keep up the good work! ~Angel
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Reviewed By: Droom On: July 24, 2004 14:37 CDT
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Aw, I loved it. And I almost cried at the end, I'd actually come online to read some fics and distract my mind, cause I was a bit down earlier, looking at my room and knowing I'm going to leave it and so much more behind in a few weeks, moving out. From the Netherlands to Belgium, for that matter. So yah, I loved it a bit more because of that, but it's a brilliant fic anyway. :) Duo telling Wufei he'd name his kids Wufei and Wufei telling Duo he wasn't worry cause Duo is gay really cracked me up. ^^ And the ending was just sweet and adorable.
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Reviewed By: Sintari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo and his sparkly, shiny things... I literally almost cried at the end of this fic. You managed to pound so much history and emotion into one short story. And Heero was so human, too. I was moved when Heero got defensive about his personal things "as if J or Odin or God would pop up and yell at him for having something that belonged to him." As usual, you were able to crystalize something so complicated and hurtful into a short phrase. You are a magnificent writer! Give you a golden cupcake!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: June 20, 2004 18:02 CDT
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GREAT FIC! Love it! Wonderful, simply wonderful. Keep up the awesome job.
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Reviewed By: Onee-sama ^__^ On: June 20, 2004 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a really great fic... and I loved the end! as long as Heero has Duo he doesn't really need anything else... just... really great! ^_^
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 06:18 CDT
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Just fill in the 10s. You always write fantastic stories and this one is no exception. I've made similar moves too. From the US to Belguim and back three years later. Went there with one kid and came back with two plus on on the way AND only one cargo container we could pack our stuff in. So I could absolutely relate to poor Duo having to part with his treasures.
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Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! You just crammed an amazing amount of emotion, humor, and backstory into such a small space! And so beautifully! Good Relena bashing, too. ;-) Excellent job!
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Reviewed By: Esukafruone [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Lovely story! I love the brief appearance of the Teddy Bear, and the history behind Jerry the Alligator. I can just imagine the cuteness of these two stuffed animals sitting around in their bedroom. But, you didn't mention Heero's laptop. Ah well it's good!
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Reviewed By: rosedreams [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 17:20 CDT
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Poor Heero. Good story. =)
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