| "I Hope You Dance" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Trixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh honey, the whole virgin factor has nothing to do with it. ^_^ I'm a virgin, too, but I have a buncha lemon fics out. :D But then again... that might just be me tryign to get SOMETHING like it out of my system for the time being. XD Anyway, it was very good and I enjoyed it. Thank you for e-mailing me back about it! Dunno why I coulnd't find it. :P I failed! But yes, very good. ;D - Trixie-chan
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Reviewed By: animedreamer On: July 17, 2004 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AWESOME! AWESOME! AWESOME! A THOUSAND TIMES OVER!!!! SO,SO,SOOOO GREAT!!!!! I LOVED IT SOO MUCH ITS NOT EVEN FUNNY!!!!!! MY BEST WISHES KEEP WRITIN'
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Title: btw
Reviewed By: Ai On: July 01, 2004 03:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
my webbie is http://www.freewebs.com/enlightenedhearts/inuyasha.html
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: Ai On: July 01, 2004 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really nice story...I love hentai with a plot...The fluff was a really good touch...btw hakama is the correct term(thats his pants) yukata is the under shirt type thing,and Haori is the red overshirt...just in case the other reviewer confused you...also i have a question for you...would you like to post your fanfic on my webbie?? its alright if you don't but there is no harm in asking is there?? if you are interested please email me at kawaiiamaiai@aol.com.
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Reviewed By: sikaria [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was very good. Im sure that with time you will be better and the lemon dont worry about it you'll get better at it with time. Sugestion: read fanfics that specially have the citrus content so you get an idea of what to write. Other than that conserning your question its Hakama. hamaka is spanish for hamac (you know those comftarble fabric "beds" people put in their back yards and tropical hotels use for relaxing) I think haori is correct but ill find out later. Take care of your self and be confident on your writting dont be scared of writting what comes to your mind and whatever topic is there at the moment use it.
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Reviewed By: inukenshin On: June 21, 2004 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol i my self would like to write but i would write a lemon get caught and hung but really good story
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Title: ummm
Reviewed By: EQenchanteress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it of course I can't finish the whole chapter right now cause I'm being kicked off but so far so good. Unlike your other reviewer...I'm not telling you all your istakes and I'll read their review later but gotta jet and nice story again!!!
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