| "Hitoi de was Tooi Ashita wo" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: PallasYuiren [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 02:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd neveer forgive kenshin either... Yu both are so not in relationships, are you?
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Reviewed By: kumi On: April 15, 2004 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a six because they died!!! and also cuz of the gay thing, R U NUTZ?
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Reviewed By: umm... On: January 11, 2004 13:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
out of character
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Reviewed By: animelove [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just don't like that Kaoru and Kenshin died just like that. this story looks like there wasn't much work in it....?_? |
Reviewed By: ami-chan15 On: August 12, 2003 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that the last 2 chapters were some what weird i personally didn't like that they died so easily and that megumi and the rest of them didn't mind that kenshin and koaru have died and are laying on the floor in their on pools of blood but besides them being ooc you did very well on grammer and it did make me laugh a little. |
Reviewed By: Scruffy the Janitor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really, did you feel you had to end it that way?
I mean I've read about tradgedies not cared for but this is ridiculous.I mean this is just pure comedy with a huge sick streak. It was going perfectly fine until you just had to make them do something stupid. Infact I would suggest you try to salvage it by writing an alternate ending perhaps you could give that murderer a different purpose other than having him completely throwing the whole series out of line.I give this two thumbs down and an F- |
Reviewed By: Bunny On: October 02, 2002 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
The writing style is very choppy and needs working on. The story was cute, but totally OOC almost all of them and it went by too quickly, things were over with in a snap. |
Reviewed By: Sakura On: March 09, 2002 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH!!! THAT WAS...**eherm** good. I liked it...a bit...well...the gay comment was...eew. |
