| "Sango Succeds" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Idiot!
Reviewed By: GDaywalker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic sucks. The spelling sucks. The grammer sucks worse and it had no story behind it. (Makes stupid face and voice) well, uh, it's after episode 135, but she does kiss him...durrr..(goes back to normal) What the hell! You didn't even put the quotation marks in the right place on most of the sentances. It looks like this fic was written by a five year old who just learned how to type. You need to add more detail. In the original Inuyasha by Rumiko Takahashi there was no relationship between Inuyasha and Sango. After all the time spent building a relationship with Kagome , there needs to be more explanation of why he decides to become mate to Sango instead. There needs to be some real backround to the story. You just rewrote the kiss scene and added a lemon to it. WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!? Next time you decide to right a fic, either ask an honest person (which by the way the other people that reviewed were probably not...) to read this fic before you post it. It's pathetic. You need to either expand or delete this fic fast because it's a disgrace. Even I admit I've made at least one bad fic in my time, but at least I appologized for how crappy it was! You seem to be proud of the way this turned out! -GDaywalker
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Reviewed By: woo hoo122 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 10:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTER THIS IS A AWESOME FIC
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Title: you suck
Reviewed By: hatuer On: May 02, 2005 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: 24fe
Reviewed By: cdwec On: March 15, 2005 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was pretty funny at the end but apart from that it wasn't all that well written...try not to rush the story so much...oh yeah, the translations are incorrect in case your wondering...I cant quite remember what she says about Miroku but she says that there are too many Kagome's...dont believe me? ask anyone who can speak and understand Japanese FLUENTLY
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Title: Continue
Reviewed By: Winged heart On: October 03, 2004 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I'm gonna say is this *claers throught* OF COURSE YOU SOULD CONTINUE!
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Reviewed By: Kiranta On: August 06, 2004 09:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
My answer is this: CONTINUE!
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Title: good
Reviewed By: Zak ( the one who killed the log in guy) On: July 02, 2004 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this one was really good. you should continue this like have them be in a all out ragin sex party (except shippo) if u dont ill kill u
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Reviewed By: Tache (to lazy to log-in) On: June 23, 2004 16:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think you should continue.
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Title: Of course
Reviewed By: Atropa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 15:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Of course you should continue.. I love every fanfic that pairs up Sango with Inu... Can not have enough of them :) So hurry up and write more... please :)
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