| "Hateful Business" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 12:01 EST
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ha ha somebody's a little jealous
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 05:59 EST
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I really like your story. It's very original. And I do agree with you, that there can't be love without passion. so just write the story the way you see it and don't let some reviewers ruin it for the rest of us.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 21:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooohoooo!!! This is awesome. Please hurry with the next chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Furys Canticle [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 16:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! :) Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 20:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far. Please hurry and update, I can't wait to find out what happens on Monday. Oh, and if you need a beta-reader, just e-mail me at theoujismate@yahoo.com.
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Reviewed By: FadingSlowly On: July 10, 2004 20:36 EDT
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i think they got together a bit too fast, but hey, it's your story. it's alright so far, interesting to see what's going to happen in the next chapter.
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Title: Interesting; review w/ a bitchy twist
Reviewed By: Furys Canticle [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Promise you'll keep writing. Sadly though i must agree w/ Lady Shay about the passion, said rubbing wasn't really hot and Bulma throwing herself at him crap. But the story you've created is making up 4 it. Those were my only complaints and that's saying something. i really enjoyed it. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: amandajune16458 On: July 08, 2004 01:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it
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Title: Hateful Business
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 07, 2004 17:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i really like it .it's so different.good start so far.i want more...update .maria
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Reviewed By: 387 On: June 23, 2004 11:19 EDT
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You've got me interested. UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Yari [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 22:33 EDT
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Not bad... That last part was pretty funny; update soon!
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Title: none
Reviewed By: guerro On: June 22, 2004 09:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really like it update soon as possible please
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Reviewed By: mona On: June 21, 2004 14:17 EDT
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can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Lady Shay [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 11:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the fanfic, and I do realize that it is rated NC-17, but somehow I think the little scene where Bulma decided to ruin Vegeta's relationship by pressing up against him wasn't hot. I think it was just thrown in there to cause sexual tension between Bulma and Vegeta and nothing more. I don't think she'd throw herself against him. I'm sorry if I sound like a bitch. I really like your story but please don't make it one of those "Bulma-and-Vegeta-are-attracted-to-each-other's-body-and-passion" becasue normally passion doesn't last and it's more often a heat of the moment thing. But if this is your style, keep it up. Very original idea, Saiyan Corps. And I love the title, peace up, Shay
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