| "Hateful Business" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 15:37 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooooooooo! *falls to her knees and begs* Oh please update real soon! I've been on the edge of my seat reading this. Its just like one of my romance novels ^_^ I love where you've gone with this so far. And I look foward to reading more. Very orginal and creative! ^____^ Always SaiyanBeauty (jademoonstar1@netzero.com)
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Title: So evil! So so evil!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 21:50 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a way to leave it hanging! Totally original, very well written. Keep writing please!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 21:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, that's evil, not just for me, but for them too...if they were real. Anyway, you're a great writer and I can't wait for your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Rock3rAtH3art On: April 08, 2005 20:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG! Please you must write the next chapter. I missed homework because I was reading this. It's just so cute and interesting and I just love it completely. Do you think you can like tell me when the next chapter will be up because I wont know please please please! Email me at revjojelp06@aol.com and I shalt love you forever and ever!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 18:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter, The heat is really rising between the two of them. But I can tell that other people are going to interfere in that. Can't wait for the next one!!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: March 28, 2005 18:04 EST
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ha ha... that was really cute
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Reviewed By: Sk8turgurl On: March 14, 2005 21:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this story very much. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: roque On: March 11, 2005 17:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great so far. cant wait till the next chapter. ^^
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 18:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwe!!! That was so cute. I know it might be too quick for them to get together, but I also know you've got more tricks up your sleeves. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: colin35 On: February 25, 2005 19:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is great so far and is a bit different of an idea which is nice. So you just need to continue with it and soon.
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Reviewed By: femae_typhoon On: February 24, 2005 16:23 EST
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GAH!!! so close!!!!! oh damnit! whats with the stoping all pof a sudden? a kiss? is that all?!?!?! *sigh* oh well. great couplke of chapters there! keep on writin' and i'll keep readin'!!
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Reviewed By: Female Typhoon On: February 18, 2005 09:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a great story and a brlliant concept. I've never read anything like the plot this has. your style is perfect and everything fits in well with the story. an update is being awaited with anticipation ^_^
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Reviewed By: story On: February 15, 2005 20:34 EST
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omg, i realy like this story, its intresting and just plain awesome. plz update soon
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Reviewed By: Laredith On: February 13, 2005 17:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. It's original and creative and easy to follow. I can't wait for you to update, keep up the great work! -Laredith
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Reviewed By: xxxxrogue On: February 05, 2005 23:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, i totally love this story, u're an awesome writer. plz update soon. :)
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