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Reviewed By: Arbitrary Doom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 19:29 CDT
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....good job sofar!.....and as for A or B.....i chose C to focus not on the family but the charicters as individuals........however i think the story should be nejinaruto......there are fiftythree to may sausnaru in this world.....i love the pairing but their are alot of them....and the way the story is going right now it seems a little hard to see them geting back to gether.....XP!!!!!!!!!! PS. this is an unrelated side note.......im not sure i should put it here......but just as a question are you going to update Bring me to Paradise?.........XP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: rein_megami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OPTION A!!!! OPTION A!!!! hehehe.. I just think that it's better because the stories here are usually dominated by SasuNaru.. So let's try something new, ne? and besides... I am a NaruNeji fan.. ahaha...^^
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 14:44 CDT
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this story is really good. i would prefer 2 have option b. im not a big fan of nejinaru.
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Reviewed By: Die Kikyo Die On: May 27, 2005 18:52 CDT
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B! DEAR LORD OPTION B! I really hope this is going to be a SasuNaru fic, it's nice and all that Neji is all caring but SasuNaru is just so muvh better!
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Title: Opinion B!!!
Reviewed By: FFantasy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 06:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Opinion B, Opinion B! I love Itachi and Sasuke! Sasuke does seem like a bastard in here, though. Anyway, please continue with the fanfic, I wanna see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: lena (ur beloved student) =P On: March 07, 2005 07:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiya! whoaa~~ ur story is great!! i enjoy reading it very very much!! lol...i hope u can continue ur story and update soon...heehee... =) and oso...i choose OPTION A...heehee... coz' OPTION B too common liao and very boring to see how sasuke trying to win naruto's heart again... >=( nejinaru pairing will do the trick to make this story more interesting!! i'll be waiting for ur chapter 4 ehh... =)
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Reviewed By: ..wow.. On: March 07, 2005 07:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style of writing is damn cool...i like it very much!! And i prefer option (a) as option (b) is alittle too common though.. So i hope you can continue your story and update soon! buck up!
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Reviewed By: cheeze!!! On: March 07, 2005 07:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like option (a) coz...i HATE SASUKE for choosing that damn SAKURA over naruto!! i cant believe it!! aargh!! i hope it's nejinaru pairing!!
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Reviewed By: Kio's cousin :P On: March 06, 2005 07:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word. EXCELLENT =) Do continue! I'm waiting!!! I'm not exactly a fan of NejiNaru pairing(cause neji belongs to hinata!!! although it's incest) *shakes head sadly* but yours is really good! ^^ I'd prefer the Uchiha one btw!
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Reviewed By: Deppage On: November 14, 2004 16:11 CST
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I like A. x3 Hyuuga-focus, I think, because Uchiha-focus is pretty common. The Hyuuga clan isn't written about as often. Eescool.
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Title: option c anywhere?
Reviewed By: FFantasy On: November 09, 2004 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Yeah, I agree with Sabaku with the NejiNaru fic thing, but I like it anyways. Anyway, I like option A, AND I like option B, but I kinda like option A better, 'cause I don't want the whole fic to be about Sasuke sulking at Naruto and blah. A little Itachi WOULD make it intresting though...
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Reviewed By: SomaliChan On: July 11, 2004 08:17 CDT
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Your Neji is so cute!!!!!! *grins* Poor Naruto and Lee. Well I do hope that neji can help Naruto recover from his heartbreak. Liked the scene that you described when they found Lee and Naruto hugging. Nearly cracked my face up laughing *grins* More onegai?
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Reviewed By: Kristinachan On: July 08, 2004 00:43 CDT
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Pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease update soon!! Your story is very good and I want to read more on what happens! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Sabaku On: June 25, 2004 19:37 CDT
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Hm. I've never read a NejiNaru fic before. o.o Neji is a little ooc, but love makes people sappy. ^__^ Interesting. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 15:02 CDT
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This is great! please update soon!!!!
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