| "Pointed Lessons" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 20:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was really good...maybe you should try to do it while he is in ox form??? :)
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much... 3rd time reading it and gets better every single time.
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 01:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much... 3rd time reading it and gets better every single time.
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Reviewed By: SecretPervyMuse On: September 13, 2005 04:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have an idea for your sequel: HANDCUFFS. *evil grin*
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Title: Niiiiice
Reviewed By: Liliiaa On: July 03, 2005 21:15 CDT
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Hey, that was really good. Black Haru is sooo much hotter than white one. I'm glad that u wrote the pairing. It's really good. Anyway, I haven't been able to tell the author of furuba, but, cows are girls, never guys. A male can only be a bull. I know, I'm a geek. But it's true! Hey, the story was really awesome. You should write another one! Yea! With the same pairing. Only, you know, a more yummy lemon. :) :) :) :)
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Title: Pointed Lessons
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn!! How can you ever write something so...Black?! I've read plenty of stories with Tohru and White Haru, but never have I read one with her and Black Haru! So sad for Tohru. So confusing for Haru at the end, and so enjoyable for the readers! I expect gr8 stories from ya'! Tchao! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Cappy On: November 11, 2004 19:11 CST
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LMFAO I LOVE THE ENDING lolz...the ending is VERY cute...lolz...um except i just CANNOT get the concept of the "inoccent" tohru...being...like...that...but then anything is possible!
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Title: cooL!
Reviewed By: cla cla On: August 31, 2004 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good! continue! more heat and raping!
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Title: lov
Reviewed By: tohru7766 On: August 31, 2004 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great continue!
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Title: Surprise !!
Reviewed By: fruitsBasketPrinceCharming [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo !! the story was good and all , but kinda sick !!! oh well, i like the basic (except the sick stuff) but it was a good way to demonstrait the black side of him! he hot !! lol, continue writing, lest sick thought.
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Reviewed By: EvilAngel-i'm logged out right now On: July 12, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooooo more lessons he says *snickers as imagination gets the better of me* i hope ther's a sequel to this. the funny part was when b. haru transformed and then he changed back into w. haru. lol!
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 18:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG I absolutly loved it! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: ilovekyosohma [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh,I loved it!It actually seemed like their characters..Except I thought Yuki would notice how close they are together *sweatdrops*
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 22:09 CDT
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OMG, that was hilarious! Poor 'innocent' Tohru... I love it!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 12:21 CDT
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hahaha!! i do not even want to no how she is going to get out of this one!! actually i do!! but i find that that would b rathter wrong!! i do not even want to no what is gong to happen when kyo finds out along with yuki and what yuki would do if he found out they were doing it right in front of him!! god!! this is so weird!! o well!! much love never forget the love!!!!
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