| "Presidential Perks" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Kiyonekage On: July 01, 2005 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...i thought that was good...I don't read many about an empty school and two people...alone much...actually...this is the first i've ever read... Special you...It was great...a little slow, but then if it hadn't i would have been lost...good descriptions..too by the way...*smiles*
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Reviewed By: Fairy Girl On: June 02, 2005 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story!
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Reviewed By: AL On: November 17, 2004 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this isn't the usual smut i encounter. You've made what horny people think of hentai as more of an art, with so much descriptive language... its amazing. Really nice.
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: ToHrUcHiCk On: October 08, 2004 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! Continue!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: PeachyGirl8897 On: October 08, 2004 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: EvilAngel69 - i'm logged out right now On: July 12, 2004 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great but what really got me was at the end where you made it so that yuki was just daydreaming. always a great way to end a fic.
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Reviewed By: Game Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa...that was great! LOL. But uh...what does owari mean? Yay! I'm the first person to review! Very nice one-shot.
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