| "FL in CL of Night" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: details
Reviewed By: kitsunesdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 17:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
MORE DETAILS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: copypaste [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well-written. You captured the dark, contemplative aspect of the manga very well. It didn't exactly feel like an episode of FLCL, but that's because you went with the feel of the manga, and I like that. The manga's actually a hella lot harder to interpret than the anime, and I admire how well you did with that. However, in all honesty, I have to say that there really wasn't a whole lot that happened in this fic. Really, a good summary could be "Naota wakes up, goes to take a piss, gets pestered by his dad, runs back to his room, almost throws up but doesn't, goes back to sleep, then wakes up to Haruko sucking him off." I apologize if that offends you. I don't mean to insult you in any way and I understand that this minimal amount of cohesive story is taken from how the mangas worked, but I feel you coulda done more. I'd understand if this was simply a study of a new style of writing. All-in-all, good job. You captured the essence of the manga perfectly. I'd like to see you write more FLCL fanfics.
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Title: God Job
Reviewed By: ChaosBleeds [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good but a little hard to understand
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Reviewed By: Peril879 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 15:35 CST
Comment/Review:
MORE!!!
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Title: You rock!
Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This rocked man, you got it all right and it was just like watching an episode of the show and just something that Haruko would do. GOOD JOB!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: cvnbcvnc On: June 24, 2004 01:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
You did great
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