Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 14:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, another one of the few that approve the Sango/Kouga pairing. Kudos./////////// Alright, not to be rude, but dialogue that begins with just a dash, and has no mark to signify the end is really annoying. If you aren't going to use quotation marks, could you at least let the reader know where the speaking ends and the narrations begins. Half of the time I have to re-read the line to sort out what is being said and what you wrote after that, seeing as you only seperate it with a comma most of the time. If you're not going to use quotations, like you should be doing, then could you at least put another dash at the end when a person is finished speaking thier line. Thanks. ///////////// I liked the story, though. It was interesting, and later on in my story "Miracle Dispenser" there will be a Kouga/Sango pairing. Do you think you could do me a bit of a favor? Could you read a few chapters of it, and maybe tell me what you think? You don't have to, but constructive feedback is considerably lacking as of late.///////////////// Anyway, keep up the good work!
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