| "Game Face" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: M@G8 On: June 24, 2004 18:33 PDT
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You are wonderful, you know it right??? This was just perfect and beautfu!! Continue because I will be there to read it!!!
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Reviewed By: Valdrianth Raptor On: June 23, 2004 20:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL gotta love one shotters. ^^. It was great. I heard about it on Kris's Deviantart page from her fanart of it. Very good indeed. You have such a wonderful writing technique. I also feel some inspiration do draw when I read your stuff. I'm gonna have to do some fanart of your works soon. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: myeerah On: June 23, 2004 18:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Utterly delightful!
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Reviewed By: sarahhink On: June 22, 2004 21:11 PDT
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oh that's not fair. I'd love to see there reactions you know it's gotta be funny. oh well. it was very good. it kinda takes your mind off of what's going on in the real fic. keep up good work
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Alesyira (laziness) On: June 22, 2004 18:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great PWP. :) Laughed my ass off at that very last line. Great job!
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Reviewed By: evilblackcat On: June 22, 2004 17:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally Rockin'!!!!! I mean come on, totally great. Especially strip poker, a complete original. Though, with Yukio, it was funny. though, you have to feel sorry for him. but when he came in the room with a loaded super soaker, that should be interesting, too bad we don't get to see or hear about the reaction(hint, hint)!!!
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Reviewed By: inu-ears On: June 22, 2004 15:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooommmgggg i loved that!!! i loved the ending w/ yukio especially!!! lol...made me laugh so hard!
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Reviewed By: Sutashii or Gohanzgirl On: June 22, 2004 13:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your writing do you know that!!! and I hope you do more of these little insights!!! I would love to hear a little of Yukios Teenage years or ANY THING in between I love this story so much! Your amazing *odd look* I dont wanna go to work!!!! *freaks* well I hafta go now *pouts* Great job!!
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Reviewed By: mACHINA lOVE On: June 22, 2004 13:12 PDT
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Crazy Yukio...lol that was a brilliant ending, I must say.
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Reviewed By: notoes On: June 22, 2004 12:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is meant for the reviewer named Indira. You obviously don't know the fic this is a spinoff of so I think you should sit down and shut up before I feel like slapping you. Try reading the base story, idiot, and you'll realise Izzy is rating the fic right. This is "erotica" not "porn". Erotica has a story with sex, porn is flat out sex with ten seconds of story. Try to learn the difference.
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Reviewed By: Shadow_within [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 11:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SSOOOO SWEET! And one of the best lemons i've ever read! I love ALL your work! Just please don't forget to update The Lucky Ones soon! I'm not quite sure i know who this one eyed person who can't hold cards is? do you mind clarifying that for me?
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 09:10 PDT
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OMFG THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST LEMONS I'VE EVER READ!!!! THIS IS SOOOOO YUMMMY!
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Reviewed By: Kellie On: June 22, 2004 07:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best lemons you've written. Very good. I love how Yukio walks in on them ^__^
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Reviewed By: Indira On: June 22, 2004 07:54 PDT
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mmm.. i think you should stick to R.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 07:25 PDT
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That Yukio! Still a kid at heart. Thanks for the Inuyasha/Kagome action and I love that it is a peek into the Lucky Ones universe. The Lucky Ones is one of my all time favorites and it would be great if you gave us some more spin-offs like this one. It's wonderful! Thanks!
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