| "Game Face" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: GunnerYunaGirl On: July 29, 2004 21:22 PDT
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I was laughing. Alot. And considering its about 2 am where I am, my parents do not appreciate it XD But that was damn funny. I can see Yukio in my head.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: July 16, 2004 20:27 PDT
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i love it!! the lucky ones is one of the best stories ever so i had to come and check out this side story. great job!
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Reviewed By: Kagome69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 17:34 PDT
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You are wonderful, you know it right??? This was just perfect and beautful!! Continue because I will be there to read more!!!
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Title: sharpieg
Reviewed By: taijiya_princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 13:24 PDT
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I can't believe that I somehow managed to miss this nice little story! It was awesome.. very tastefully done.. and I'd love to know what Yukio accomplished with that super soaker. hehe I'm a big fan of The Lucky Ones, and look forward to more of the story, and maybe if us fans are lucky, we'll get more of these nice little one-shots as well! Thanks again!
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Reviewed By: Cha! On: July 12, 2004 04:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! that was sooo great, and the ending made me laugh so hard! the super soaker...oh God. ^___^
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Reviewed By: KagoKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 02:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was about the cutest and funniest one-shot I've ever read...thank you!! ...you've made my day-eh...er, night!!! =^-.~^=
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Reviewed By: WOWWWWWWWWWW On: July 05, 2004 21:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutely AMAZING...so speechless. Never have I read a story that gave this couples relationship such justice. REALLY...WOW.
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Reviewed By: Jezebel On: July 03, 2004 18:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DEAR GOD! That was amazing. I love The Lucky Ones. you should write more short stories like this. It was great! You never cease to amaze us. YOU ROCK!
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Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 06:08 PDT
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As always, Ter, you're the best. I just love this story! Yukio's "La La la" when they started talking about Anne Rice's book. That was classic! ! ! Whenever it is emailed to me that a new chapter is up, I just can't wait to read it. Thank you so much! ! ! I look forward to whatever you throw at us!
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Title: Another amazing chapter
Reviewed By: EarthDragonette [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 06:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to let you know that I found this to be another wonderfully written, creative, and crazy in-character chapter. I *loved* getting inside of Miroku's head and seeing more examples of Inuyasha and Kagome's parenting through the years. I have to say my favorite parts were examples of Inuyasha's fathering methods - your interpretation made so much sense to me, and it was all very sweet and powerful. I look forward to seeing what else you have for us =)
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Reviewed By: kokoro no miko On: June 29, 2004 04:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOO sweet--your interpretations of the characters pretty much match my own, so I can really enjoy them! I would pay real money to find out what happens when Yukio USES that super soaker and air horn! I can't wait to see more of The Lucky Ones, either in the original or in more of these little bits.
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Reviewed By: Lady Blackmour [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 04:38 PDT
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Yes! Yes to Kagome's shirt I say! Seriously, that shirt owns. And so does this story. You've done it again, my dear. Yukio manages to be awesome even in such a short appearance. And your love scene is beautiful. Just pervy enough...but not porn in the least. Just sweet and gentle. Keep at it. Yours, Lady Blackmour
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Reviewed By: EarthDragonette [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2004 19:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is *so* funny. I've been following The Lost Ones for awhile now, and this was the perfect insert for it. I'd wondered about the Disney World trip, and I think your elaboration of it was crazy in character and very, very sweet. One of the things I love about your interpretations of Inuyasha and Kagome is that they have a combination of maturity and youth that keep to the original characters while entertaining personal growth. Oh, and Yukio's role was priceless! This was awesome. Thank-you so much for writing it - I really enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: June 25, 2004 19:31 PDT
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omg,......wow that was AWESOME!!!
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Reviewed By: sikaria [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 13:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOu are a incredible even in pwp that was so cool and realistic. You have the gift you should turn lucky ones into a book or something Ill buy it and make christmas presents that include it. Please never stop writting.
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