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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 09:04 PST
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that was funny!! i liked it....hehe....sometimes Disney World calls for a little strip poker now and again....great one shot
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Title: where's Miroku?
Reviewed By: Clawfang On: November 02, 2004 12:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Lucky Ones is the coolest fanfic EVER! I'd like to read a oneshot where Mirokur confront his mom and tells her off. That would be nice. And by the way, this one was hot.
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Reviewed By: ichie On: October 28, 2004 14:30 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the ending was so funny and the part when yukio walks in during the game and they start talking about sleeping beauty ^.^ that was funny ^.~ i luv it and i saw the picture before i read this so yeah XD
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Reviewed By: Sarah Hinkle On: October 12, 2004 20:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i've read this and all your other stories. so i guess you could say i'm a fan. you definitely have talent and know how to use it. this is very good one of the best ones i've read. but i was wondering if one day when you have time and stuff you would consider writing what happened when yukio woke them up i just know it would be hilarious. just a thought. love your stories. bye
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 22:26 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was intense, but I really enjoyed it. Hope to get to read more of your work in the future. ^.~
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Title: you hentai, you! /snicker/
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 06:41 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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^_^ That was cute! (POOOOOR Yukio) Makes me wonder what you could write if Yasha-chan got the super soaker later and instigated a private wet t-shirt contest... (If Kagome was in the mood to tease.....) Ok.. i'm a hentai too.. i admit it. that's what makes life fun! ~Caliko
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Title: Wolf whistle
Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 21:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I'll betcha that one-shot left a lot of people hot-n-bothered. The little bouts of humor were the perfect touch, too. Especially that ending: Yukio coming in with a super-soaker and airhorn. Ha ha! Serves Inu right for teasing him about Sleeping Beauty - Kagome too for not letting it die. Personally I would've stolen their skivvies until they apologized. But then, that might not bug Inuyasha too much, huh? Ah well. Still a nice idea. I might pull it on my brother sometime. Well, now I'm off to check and see what other fics you've got. Later.
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Title: Wolf whistle
Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 21:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I'll betcha that one-shot left a lot of people hot-n-bothered. The little bouts of humor were the perfect touch, too. Especially that ending: Yukio coming in with a super-soaker and airhorn. Ha ha! Serves Inu right for teasing him about Sleeping Beauty - Kagome too for not letting it die. Personally I would've stolen their skivvies until they apologized. But then, that might not bug Inuyasha too much, huh? Ah well. Still a nice idea. I might pull it on my brother sometime. Well, now I'm off to check and see what other fics you've got. Later.
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 15:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was Cute! and i think Yukio was looking to die, how did he survive waking them up like that. i have to admit that these stories of your make me wish for more of Yukio and Miroku, and Eri and Tetsu, but that is just me. I had a ton of Fun with these stories and hope you will write more as you are a fantastic author!.
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Reviewed By: Youkai Fate On: September 10, 2004 04:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Big grin...love the ending. LOL! I was missing TLO and went sniffing around for the lemon you mentioned in the story, and voila! Another wonderful story. Loved it. Take care and look for more spin-offs from the TLO universe. Fate
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Title: I should have read this ages ago
Reviewed By: Mangetsu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 12:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stellar! Absolutely stellar! Terri you are the queen of Lemons when it comes to Inuyasha and Kagome. This little jem is going straight off to my webpage to bask in the sun right next to Lucky Ones. I hope you write many more one-shots from the LO universe. It was just too good of a story to let it fade away completely. Well done, my friend. God Bless. Kanzen ne Tsuki P.S. You probably don't remember who I am, but I know who you are, and there is aways a place in my IY archives for your work. It is some of the best on the web.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 19:04 PDT
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this is a great oneshot
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: August 23, 2004 17:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Bibles veiw on sex is actually liberal with the book SONG OF SONGS, being the most raciest love poetry written in all time. The Hypocrites in my faith denounce sex even though they are products of it and do it themselves. Well This was a good story and brings back some memorys of a still possesed coffee table and card set I still "use", though the lost of my testicles in the Tet offensive means only my wife really benefits, but I'm not bitter. Semper Fidelis Brigadier General Thomas B Golladay jr USMC (Ret)
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Reviewed By: Moomoo (moo-moo-chan) On: August 07, 2004 20:48 PDT
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XD I love Yukio!!! He is so cool :3 *huggles him to death* ^^ I even named my computer after him XDD;; *goes to draw a fanart of him*
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 23:40 PDT
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The Lucky Ones has become my favorite fic...so I was thrilled to see that you had written this one. Very amusing, to say the least. Keep on writing!!
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