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| "There Loss Her Gain" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: musicianofdarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It has a nice plotline and I love the fact that Cassie could accept Ranma in either form!
| Reviewed By: Musixx On: July 29, 2007 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMMIT! UPDATE!!!! Btw I luvd the story!
| Title: Update, onegai? and helpful comments
Reviewed By: Crimsha1080 On: October 14, 2004 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I read your fic and I've got to say that so far the unique concept of a Ranma/Carrie crossover is very cool and seems to be working well. Just keep on loading up the angst, betrayal, and Cassie/Ranma romance and your story should do fine. Also, may I suggest, if Cassie's power is going to be the usual pyrokinesis, please consider making Ranma's power some sort of yin to Cassie's yang pyrokinesis.(Meaning opposite of pyrokinesis, like having psychic control over ice or the power of freezing) Either that, or a conscious use of the Neko-ken(Cat-fist), possibly going as far as a rage-induced transformation to what I would deem a Nekojin (Cat-Human Hybrid, usually with lightly furred bodies, long, pointed cat-like ears, larger, sharper fangs(eye-teeth) and bicuspids(behind eye-teeth), long slender cat tails, and (especially with Neko-ken victims/trainees/Masters) six-inch to three-foot long ki claws that are usually even sharper than Wolverine's adamantium claws(though not quite as sharp as the strongest Yamasenken vacuum blades, the First-Rate Demon Assault Bomb)) Anyway, whatever you choose to do, I will continue to read and enjoy your story
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