Title: ummm...
Reviewed By: Blah_Blah_Blah On: June 23, 2004 16:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your story actually sounds like it would be an interesting read if it weren't for the use of so much damn slang. *Sorry* That happens to be one of my pet peeves...a story like anything you do should reflect who you are but it should also be something that is understandable. While I'm sure that this is enjoyable to you, you should also consider your readers...they should have some sort of IQ (ideally) and thus you should write as if they do. The insertion of minor slang is acceptable but to write the entire fic in slang just too much. Most slang use is decided by the region that you live in and your age group...remember that not everyone lives where you do or is within the same age group. Just think of this as friendly feedback and a show of support. It's a good idea for a plot and I look forward to reading more of your ideas.
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