| "World Curled Dark" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 18:12 CDT
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wow that is interesting! When do Omittchi and Aya-chan find out... wow... that was pretty hot... the scenes.... continue please
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Reviewed By: KD On: July 12, 2005 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another chapter, like an answer to a twisted prayer...I was just reading this yesterday on your website and wishing there was more. Thank you!!!
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Reviewed By: reviwer01 On: July 11, 2005 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: YohjisKareBear [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 23:07 CST
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i just want to let you know that i love your story. please continue it... please??? :D
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Title: on strawberries
Reviewed By: scarlet_seduction [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 15:39 CST
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Thanks to everyone for the feedback to date - just to reply to Talyssa's point about the strawberries - as we mention in the fic, Yohji has grown these himself, specifically because, as you so rightly observe, they're hard to come by in the winter. ^_~
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Title: yum - chapter 6
Reviewed By: Talyssa_ On: August 13, 2004 09:22 CDT
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*_* This was.....Yum. It made me very very happy. ::licks you both:: But for the record they don't sell strawberries in the summer in Japan. They sell them in the winter for um...christmas cakes. Don't ask me why, I can't really explain it either, but they pretty much ONLY sell them in the winter and theres no such thing as fruit for next to nothing. -_- a frigging orange, ONE costs 128 yen. ::grumbles:: Sorry I just had to mention as I've now spent a year here eyeing fruit longingly and getting all excited when the seasonal fruit (grapes right now) goes on sale for less than 400 yen a pack. ::Sob::
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 22:18 CDT
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great story!
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Reviewed By: Theresa On: July 03, 2004 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. Kudos.
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Reviewed By: YohjiBabe2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE THE STORY!!! I LOVE YOHJI POV'S, THEY ARE FUNNY TO ME. PLEASE CONTINUE. I WOULD LIKE TO READ THE REST OF IT.
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