| "Love Is A Mystery" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: @ t0k0
Reviewed By: SamusAran of SR388 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2013 22:37 EDT
Comment/Review:
well, considering this was originally written when i WAS a sophmore and new to writing fanfics, i'll take that as a compliment. and again i apologize for the long ass update. but after reading this after so long--and having moved onto to other genres--i'll be trying to update this again. |
Reviewed By: t0k0 On: January 26, 2010 14:16 EST
Comment/Review:
honestly i don't see what the hype about this story was. i was unable to finish chapter 2 due to boredome. not to say you dont have a talent. im just thinking you coulda used a less-sophomoric style of writeing. its kinda childish. now being a college grad who majored in english might have made me a bit biased, but still. oh and it was a little hard to read when you don't start the paragraphs properly. the topics all seem to run together and left me going "eh?" bottom line 6/10 you have a few good moments, but you definitly can improve.
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Title: apologies....
Reviewed By: SamusAran of SR388 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 05:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
for those that have been waiting for me to update, i'm sorry for making u wait. my methods of writing are now insanely limited. however, i will try to add the next chapter, and you can look forward to seeing other fanfics fom my crazy sex-driven overly-active brain.
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Reviewed By: Gear001 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 17:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Im new to the site but ive admiered the work for bout 6 months now. Cool story man. I was thinkin i might be able to get some of my characthers in here. but that ill ask of latter. i dont like imposing. keep up the good work.
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Title: veegieboogersrgreat
Reviewed By: Plastic Spoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 15:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
its a good story keep it up!! it was funny too! keep up the good work and the funnies! plastic spoons was here!
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Title: moremore
Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 13:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very Very good please write more. This is so good, one question why was the first chater updated in 2005 and the rest 2004? Anyway very very good, please write more and more and more. Love yah! :)
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Reviewed By: RED EYE CAT On: November 01, 2004 04:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST PLES FINS IT AND SORRY FOR SPILLING ERR'S AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR BB SURPRISE
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Title: HSA2
Reviewed By: HyperSonicAdam2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude I gotta say, coming from a conniseur of hentai this has been one of the most awesome TT lemons I've ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But I have to say even though I'm deeply flattered that you used a few of my scenarios and quotes and crap I don't like it that you didn't ask me. But its still cool. I could definately see elements of "2 Sourcers Meet", "Aphrodisiac", "Robins B-day Surprise", and....am I missing anything? Well anyway as long as you dont steal my catchphrase "wipe that fuckin' smile off your face and wipe your fuckin keyboard" than we'e cool. Good luck dude
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Reviewed By: Jake666 On: August 26, 2004 07:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a real talent on your hands there... keep it up! I MUST read the rest of the fic once you post it up!!
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Reviewed By: bloodroseee On: August 03, 2004 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story
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Title: magnum
Reviewed By: blaze417 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice keep it up dude and you better reed my e-mail or ill hunt you down gray- magnum
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: HyperSonicAdam On: July 01, 2004 13:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice work dude, awesome so far. Kinda reminds me of my "When two Sorcerers Meet" fic but whatever. Keep it up dude, I'd love to see more. And thank btw for liking my stuff. I'm thinkin' of quitting soon.
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Title: Good job andrew this is Shawn A.K.A. Spyder
Reviewed By: Spyder 33 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 15:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Job Andrew but I'll be waiting for my character to pop into place so that will boost up and liven the story
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Title: not bad my friend not bad
Reviewed By: mackattack On: June 23, 2004 21:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm gonna have to say that was insane! Best fic I have read so far and how it's going!!! I like the way that everything is up-to-date like the crash game and the Tips-and-Tricks magazine, awesom man! I also like the fact that Beast Boy had a 'Wet Dream' ha ha ha! And doesn't HyperSonicAdam2 make the best lemon fics? Long story short, great fic and keep it going man woo hoo! Later!!!
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