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| "Halloween Candy" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: foxyval [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. So naughty...I love it. I also love that you managed to keep from typos and grammatical errors (I'm a bit of a freak, when it comes to that).
| Reviewed By: D-Reaper Originalle [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you kept it in the right tense for fiction, and you've got no misspelled words... _^^_ That was kind of kinky! As many Pokémon fics as there are, I can't seem to find any good yaoi ones. Good one, buddy; I likes them cupcakes. Lemon cupcakes...
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