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Reviewed By: Raberba girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 21:56 CDT
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Kind of confusing (because of all the original characters), but it's an interesting idea.
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Reviewed By: empressariyana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 13:56 CDT
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Maybe you could tinker with your formatting. Mostly the scene changes. I know MM sometimes messes up the formating. They mess up my work all the time. I am still trying to figure out how to fix the problem. Anyways, keep writing, don't get discourage you only get better with practice.
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Reviewed By: ilovekyosohma [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 00:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think i can only see my reviews if i post...
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Title: Choose Me.
Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Raven Sohma. Age: 26. Gender: Female. Clothes: Wears black gothic dresses all the time. Hobbies: Learning wicthcraft, walking alone in graveyards, Painting, writing poems, and reading Shigure's books. Personality: She acts like Hatori, but has a black side like Haru too. History: Well, she has none.
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Reviewed By: ilovekyosohma [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 01:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Come on!I need more pleeeaassee
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Title: Forgot Something!
Reviewed By: Saoko Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, forgot some things. Appearance: Pale skin, Blood red hair, crystaline blue eyes, and usually her nails are painted black Clothing Extras: Wears a black collar, without spikes, and wears a black butterfly in her hair. Thanks!
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Title: Please Choose Me ^_^
Reviewed By: Saoko Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 12:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name: Frost Sohma Age: 15 Gender: Female Clothes: Really likes black outfits. Most of the time you see her wearing a black jumper like dress with a different color shirt underneath each day. Sometimes she wears other things like a black tank top and black pants. Once in a while she'll wear red outfits, but mostly black. Hobbies: Learning curses, Tennis, Wandering around aimlessly, Playing the Acoustic Guitar and Piano Personality: She is very shy when you first meet her, but once she starts to trust she opens up into a very gentle girl who is very mistunderstood. History: When she was younger Frost was abused by her parents and to escape the pain of abuse she put a curse on herself so she wouldn't be abused by any other people or get hurt. The curse was that she would turn into a wolf when hugged by a member of the opposite gender. The only exception to the curse was the members of the zodiac curse. She soon started to learn more curses so she really distrusted other people except her one childhood friend Haru. Pairing: Haru, please, if not pair her with anyone else if you like.
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