| "Cool Baby" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: O_O Oh dear god that was hot!!!!!
Reviewed By: JOEYSBABE On: August 28, 2005 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my god that was so hot...wow...I love it! I'd say continue...but i think that you stopped writing a long time ago on this story...well...*drools at Seto and Jou in leather* Its hot...what can I say
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 10:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh... dear.... god..... SEXY!!! *wolf whistle* oh yeah baby!!! seto and jou in leather?!?! O.o I nearly passed out. I am gonna need serious Elijah Wood time if I'm ever gonna get calmed down Muse-Elijah: oh shit. SEE?? LOOK WHAT YOU'VE DONE!!! man, I'll never get any sleep....
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Reviewed By: Yanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. I have two things to pick a nit with you for. One, I don't see Seto with a Prowler {yuck!} I see him with a custom rod; possibly a re-built 50's era Dodge. Big front seat; and two, sex in a Prowler? ever been in one? front seat is way to small but like I said other than my obsessive attention to nit picky details really good.
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