| "New Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA notloggrd in damn it On: August 01, 2004 00:24 CDT
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OMG!! DUDE U LEFT ME IN THE MIDDLE OF A GREAT LEMON!!!!!! BAD KETHRY!! EVIL EVIL!!!!! LOL GETA IS SO DAMN FORCEFULL .....*breaks down* WHY CANT I BE A SAIYAN OH GOD!!!! :(!!!! OK K UPDATE SOON OR I'll DIE AND PLEASE DUDE DONT HOLD OUT ON THE LEMONS THATS EVIL A CLIFY LEMON IS EVIL !!! IM STILL CRYING!!!!!!! WAH!!!!!!!! LOL LATER! UPDATE PLEASEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bryt On: July 30, 2004 09:37 CDT
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oops didnt finish omg u need to read the rest . the tails and crosses arms mmm u jus gotta read it. its worth it.
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Reviewed By: bryt On: July 30, 2004 09:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this story is great but ive gotten to read more and yall DONT KNOW THE HALF OF IT.
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Reviewed By: Jay6 On: July 30, 2004 01:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is so good! You should post it on Fanfiction.net also!
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA notloggedin damnit On: July 25, 2004 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow ....I love this story it gives something new to the whole DBZ thing I love the fic. You have Geta nailed I love it its rare for authors to make Geta just like the series so good for u. Please update soon I can wait to devour the next chap! Later>:D
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Title: Typo Queen
Reviewed By: SMK On: July 01, 2004 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although I spotted some typos, I'd have to say this was very well written. I'm used to proofreading everything since I used to be a secretary and did it for a living. Very original! I wait with anticipation to see the forthcoming chapters. Keep up the good work! :)
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Reviewed By: Luna_Silverdreams On: July 01, 2004 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I definitely love where this story is going; I dig your writing style and excellent word choice, not to mention the characters in the story! Also, you've described Vageta's attitude JUST right! I envy you for being able to paint such an elaborate picture with words and can not wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: gofamofa20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2004 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story has a lot of potentail, I've read the three chapters and already I'm hooked. Your choice of words makes the story easy to reading and incredibly engaging. I make sure to keep an eye out for the next chapter. Hope you'll updae soon, see ya :)
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