| "Confused Consiounce" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: WOW KAIBA'S HUGGING!!!!!!!!!! AWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude I can't believe you ended the chapter like that, that was so mean. Yumi: she has the right to do that she is the author. Lady Vaoh: I don't think it's nice. Yumi: stop your moping, what's done is done now give the actual review. Lady Vaoh: *sticks her tongue out at Yumi* Anyway I love this fic it rocks oh yeah. Poor Mokuba I guess we all go through that. Yumi: did you? Lady Vaoh: no not really. But the way I picture Jaydyn I would have fallen for him too *wink*wink*. Oh and Kaiba was so sweet to his little brother, who knew that he knew how to hug. Anyway I'm so waiting for an update so update soon. Sincerely your new reader, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Reviewed By: kaibajoey1 On: July 21, 2004 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your stroy so much it's very fun to read. i hope to see the 3rd chapter up very soon. as for seto/joey i think you should just use it in this story so mokuba has someone to talk to it about and then if your up to it write like a side story for seto/joey. i hope to read more of your work. i also like the fact that you were very good with you spelling and your creativity. please update soon * puppy eyes *
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Reviewed By: Black rose of horror [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 21:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
ummm... i meant ' a grave' in my last sentence in my last review...gomen ne...*sweatdrop*
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Reviewed By: Black rose of horror [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! you EVIL,EVIL,EVIL person you!!!!!!WAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! *starts bawling her eyes out* YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THAT!!!! CONTINUE OR SUFFER!!! *makes moves to choke you* waaii...*puts hands on your shoulders* how COULD you....!! *slowly slides to floor* You: *raises eyebrow* oooookaaaayyyyy..... me: I'LL DIE WITHOUT IT BEING CONTINUED!!! *goes of to dig agrae to die in JUST INCASE you don't update*
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I loved it. Please hurry and update soon, k.
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