Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2004 06:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
well, interesting, this is going to turn into a lovely story... Just a little thing: "Amarli" means 'to love them'; 'Loving you' is "Amandoti" and 'to love you' is "Amarti" ( "li" is a suffix for third person plural, while "ti" is for the second person singular). Also, when you in English say 'Honey', even if in Italian honey is "miele", as endearment we use words like "tesoro" (treasure), "pulcino mio" (my little duck), etc... I noticed you used "caro" for Kagome... well, "caro" is for boys/men, the feminine is "cara". Ok, sorry for the corrections, keep writing, I'm very curious ^_^V
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