| "Even If She Hates Me" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: LoViNg iT
Reviewed By: uR FaN On: November 07, 2004 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohh man u got to finish this .. do they get together? do they share thier feelings with eachother ? what happens next? oh man this was so depressing i almost had a tear in my eye !!! PLZZZZZZZ FINISHHHHH PLZZZZZZZZ ... loving this story
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Reviewed By: Jewel On: July 12, 2004 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic, and I think you're right in the way that you're portraying Chi-Chi, I know that's how I would react should that be what happened to me... This fic only needs one more thing... MORE CHAPPIES!!! ^_^ update soon please!
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Reviewed By: dragoneyes BC On: July 07, 2004 10:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please let them get back together PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: FadingSlowly On: June 29, 2004 13:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
my heart broke for goku. seriously, tears came to my eyes and everything. you're not going to end it there, are you? that would be too cruel.
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Reviewed By: Rosa. On: June 29, 2004 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats soo sad! But good. This story is really good so please update!
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Reviewed By: Anouk On: June 28, 2004 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story! ChiChi jumps to conclusions too fast, but that's just ChiChi, ain't it? She doesn't seem out of character at all. Good story, hope you continue!
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