| "Guilty Concience" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: update soon!!
Reviewed By: kos mos On: July 08, 2004 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i only found 1 speling mistake!!! great job thyran this was amazing and cool to read. i sure hope you decide to keep on wrighting more... i lvoe it i love it i love it!!!!!!!!
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Title: nicccccce
Reviewed By: tamara On: July 08, 2004 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was very nice to read! I hope you update it soon - I can't wait!!!!! I like the idea and your style of writing alot! I noticed a couple spelling mistakes but aside from that it was near perfect!!!! keep it comin! tamara
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