| "The End is Only the Beginning" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: Renor Faer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 22:47 CST
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i am enjoying this fic a lot. i just started reading it today. The thing that really distracted me through most all the of it so far is the grammar and tense mistakes. If you would like someone to go over your chapters before submitting them i'd be happy to, my email is in my profile or you can IM me at xxse la vixx on AIM. I really like it so far, it has a nice plot that keeps you interested. keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love THe Chapter 12 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: IVECOMETOSTEALURSOUL On: March 14, 2005 21:50 CST
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Cool. Keep it up and we might be talking a good story. INUKAGS 4 EVER!!!!!! Kags and Inu belong to each other take that away and there's no story. At least not one worth telling.
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Reviewed By: Diesel Typhoon (sorry not signed in) On: March 14, 2005 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your story, I've been reading it since the begining, just never had the time to review, it's wonderful, hilarious, and one of a kind, I love it. Please keep it up!
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: BlackQueenOfTheWest On: March 13, 2005 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU ! ! ! ! ! For finaly updating your story , if you update at least once every 1-2 months alot of the people I know who are reading this story will be happy. Thanks again for updating.
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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 13:32 CST
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Yay! This is so much fun reading your stories. It's so ... I can't explain how.
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: March 13, 2005 12:48 CST
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I like it. You are a very good author. I'm on the edge of my seat wanting to know where you are going with the story. I can't wait for more!
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Blackqueenofthewest On: March 12, 2005 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story but FOR THE LOVE OF GOD UUUUUPPPPPPDDDDDAAAATTTTEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your readers will lose interest if you just leave them hanging at least leave an AN note to tell us when your going to write more or if your just going to quit the story
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Reviewed By: Michi-Chan6 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 00:46 CST
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Hey great chapter! I sort of hope that you don't start another fic. I find that when authors write more than once fic at a time they lose motivation to work on their first fic. I do hate it when I find a fic that I really like, such as this one, and the author doesn't finish it. Not that you won't finish this... but now I'm rambling. So, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 20:35 CST
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Great chapter that was so AWESOME...LOL..I liked their reactions to Shippou...LOL...THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 17:55 CST
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Now, Shippo just seems to have taken after Inuyasha and his manners. Yay, thank you for updateing the story. Happy Day Before Christmas Eve. :)
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Reviewed By: rocknroll7806 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 22:43 CST
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OoOoOo interesting.... Kinda funky how teh cute lil shippo gets mixed up with the funky dirty mutants from the underground.. But yeah.. its alright.
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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 17:20 CST
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thanks for updating. I really can't seem to picture shippo with pirceings over his face. Please update soon
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Dark miko-san On: December 03, 2004 08:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Asome story so far but you need to updAte more often PLEASE UPDATE SOON ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !! ! ! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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Reviewed By: lilmizflashythang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 09:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story please continue.
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