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Reviewed By: A very happy person [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very happy person: Well, I must say it is very enjoyable and very original. For the style of writing rating the reason I didn't give you a full ten is I have a few better styles. Although, this fic was almost flawless. Very smooth and thorough. Even Kazuma's accent was well done. You put them all into character beautifully and I hope to read more from you. The one problem I had was trying to put Kagome into the scene where Shizuru carried her. In the Inuyasha universe Kagome has a normal height and in her own universe Shizuru has a normal height. It would help if you could clarify just how tall Kagome is in this world... please use inches or fellow characters. I love the metric system but I have a hard time visualizing it. Keep up the good work! Naraku: You made me out to be a scum bag... A very happy person: I know, isn't it great? Naraku: Uh... Ja ne *evil grin*
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Title: Thoughts....
Reviewed By: DragonWitch66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there! sorry but the whole spelling bumped your score but its all good! man I'm pissed cuz this stupid thing wont let me write your review with as me signed in oh well anyways to a different subject. I thought I would put my two cents in about the whole pairing thing, usually I just let the author do their thing with this but when i get a feeling that i should review about a subject i listen to my instinct. I think that kagome and sesshoumaru should in the be the couple in the end, for some reason the logan pairing seems wrong, because it seems like kagome is pulled to Logan becuase he reacts like inu, but we all know there can only be one inu. As for the reason for the sesshoumaru pairing i think that would be better because he can relate to and understand kagome better than logan can, I would find that the logan pairing would be more physical than anything deeper. Because sesshoumaru and kagome understand each better that would seem like the better pairing, like i said to me the Logan and Kagome pairing just doesn't seem right for a reason. well thats my point of view, i know i go to in to depth when they are just characters but hey thats how i am! I enjoy your story and keep up the good work! I wish you luck on your future chapters!
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Reviewed By: stormsight On: July 07, 2005 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh thats no trouble Kag should definaly end up with Sesshoumaru Logan is just a bit wrong feeling with Kagome in a way he is a bit like inuyasha all hot headed and temramental. But Sesshoumaru is her opposite and to me they just click and then there just the wierd factor I just dont think i could read a fic that had Logan and Kagome dating
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Title: HI!!!! ^_^
Reviewed By: SnowyRosey [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo!!! It's my birthday can you please be nice and update soon ? I think it would be neat if you did Kag/Logan pairing . ^_^!!!^_^
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Title: Pairings
Reviewed By: Chibes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Some how I'm guessing Kag/Logan will be a pairing. I'm so happy you updated and are Remy and Rougue reincarnations of Sango and Miroku, they hold the same chemistry the demon hunter and monk had in the past. Scott and Jean obviously, well Sesshomaru I guess could possible match with Oro, she is calm and tolerant and can electric our favorite bisshie if he misbehaves. Shippo on the other hand would do well with Jubilee they both have a childish air about themselves that can go great with oneanother. Kagura and Kanna I'm not sure about. But, those are my suggested pairings and remember school is almost done. Please update soon. Ja Ne from the almighty Chibes
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 03:15 CDT
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good luck on figuring out who gets together with who. I'd give you a sugestion but frankly i can't think of any. without a good alternative for the one who doesn't get her i'd feel bad for him. i think kagome could go with either, it's a bit of a cop-out but i'd just choose one and then introduce another character to sort of soften the blow (but not till after she chooses and he has some time to be sad. cause before that it's not much a desition on her part anymore and what fun is that?) take your time with a climax for the story. i'd could use some reading matterial. been out of school since mid may and frankly i'm bored. turns out going away for collage has it's down sides. who knew? love the story by the way. i started reading another x-men inuyasha cross over once before but i think the author dropped it, cause it stopped being up dated. i hope that doesn't happen here. please continue up dating it's nice to have something a little out of the norm from other inuyasha stories. having the x-men addition gives it spice. and i love the idea that mutants are really diluted demons! never thought of it that way but i guess it does make sence. anyway, i'm rambling. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 20:27 CDT
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I do hope another chapter comes out when you can update, I enjoy this story as I've already told you. ~Tsuki
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 20:03 CDT
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I don't don't really wanna see Kagome paired with Logan but with Sesshomaru but since I don't have anything to back my preferred pairing I won't bug ya. Just keep the chapters flowing is all I ask.^^I hope to see another chappie soon.
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 10:40 CDT
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I am happy that you updated!! this chapter was very good, I liked how descriptive it was. ~Tsuki
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, it's been so long since I have reviewed to anything. I can't garentee i'll always be able to. it feels like forever since i've picked up a new story to read. i really like this one. i'm glad you kept what you did from the old x-men. i watched the cartoon from the 90's. it was one of my favorets! oh and the crack about the yellow spandex... pricless! i love the story. my spelling and grammer is about as bad as yours so no worries. i've been trained in the art of reading around those type of things. i think this might be the first story i've read where a relationship between kagome and someone who isn't inuyasha isn't the bad of a thing. usually i wouldn't even bother to read it. i love some of the banter between the characters. expecially the stuff between the inuyasha characters. having fluffy just makes everything fun. i hope you continue soon! oh and by the way i think a naruto story would be fantactic! i love that series. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Chibes [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Appart from the awkward tense use I really like the story, I wonder are there any other x-men inu crossovers. O.O do ayame and kouga have pups, It'll be funny if they do and one of them takes after their father in respects to kagome, Poor Logan how will he react to this.
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Title: ITS ABOUT FUCKING TIME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Crimson Stalker On: May 28, 2005 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
START UPDATING MORE OFTEN OR THERE WILL BE HELL TO PAY ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! By the way LOVED the latest chapter remember UPDATE OR ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is suck a kick ass story. you need to update so we can all have a piece of mind back lol well anywho being an author myself i can see how chaps can run slow. good luck though and pleasr try to update soon
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Reviewed By: shinoni360 On: May 22, 2005 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want an update cause everysingle day i check for updates and there are none come on give me a break this is my favorite fic inthe world and i want updates
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Title: UPDATE! ! ! ! ! !!!
Reviewed By: BlackFox92 On: May 18, 2005 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEE! !!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!! UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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