Reviewed By: Review Fairy On: March 20, 2005 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Detail, woman, DETAIL! I think this could be much better if you had about... let's say about two more pages. I like the idea, but at the moment is just so, so... bland. There's no THERE there. I'm giveing you an overall rating of six almost totally on potential. Abuse it not, small one. :D
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