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| "Seto's Week" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Cao On: August 22, 2004 13:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it so far. Keep going. As for ideas, how about a few 'toys'?
| Reviewed By: Christi Morelei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 01:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
So sweet and so hot at the same time! Please write more, I absolutely adore this fic! ^_^
| Title: aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww . . . .
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you're going to keep up with the game theme, then I'm sorry but I don't have any ideas to help you right now. On a lighter note, this has been a wonderful little fic so far, and I love it. I'll be cheering you on the whole way, and if I get any ideas I'll let you know. Good Luck!
| Reviewed By: Magician Valkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice fic, it's wonderful so far ^-^! Hehe, your such an amazing writer, i love your work, keep it up! *wink* can't wait for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Cleverkitty27 On: June 29, 2004 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was COOL! How about bondage? That sounds like something Seto would do.
| Title: *evil grin*
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(Oh I will find a way to log in here . . oh yes. . . someday) On: June 28, 2004 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it! As for ideas, well they all involve Sunday toppings and no spoons. [Bluntly getting one of the pair aroused and spraying whipped cream over their whole length for the other to lick off. Good with chocolate sauce, honey, or type of pancake syrups as well.] Other than that, I think in a lot of other fics Yami is totally addicted to and turned on by chocolate, of really sweet things. Other ideas involve dressing up in costumes [mmm . . .black cat ears and tail on Yami with a bell on his collar. . . ^____^] or edible clothing, romantic bath or swim together, maybe a day at the park or a fair. I don't know if that helps, but hopefully it gives you some ideas. Good luck, I'll be following this. OH, thanks for the Anzu bashing!!!
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