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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 19:03 CDT
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Great chapter update soon.
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Reviewed By: jujiggy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 21:14 CDT
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Great story! No matter what some might tell you, don't bother changing your work. If they can't appreciate it as it stands, then why are they reading it in the first place? ^_^; Sorry if that doesn't make any sense, but that's how I feel about it. I know that you can't post as often as you'd want to, but please don't end this story! I am way too addicted to give it up now, heh... ^^; Keep up the good work! ^_^ And good luck with school too!
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Title: totally lost
Reviewed By: Laina On: August 09, 2004 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very lost your fic just jumps around. It would be really good if you would just fill us all in and then go from there. Yeah I gather that someone is playing with their minds but you need to give us more of a clue as to who and why. Please don't string it out any more, fill in the gaps. I don't mean this as a flame, I just hope it tells you my opinion.
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan*notloggedin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 16:12 CDT
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 16:11 CDT
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Update soon.Yeah....bye.
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan*notloggedin On: August 07, 2004 14:05 CDT
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Reviewed By: Bamber [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fic, I have seen many others, but this is my favorite so far!
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 12:05 CDT
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Reviewed By: the angel with black wings On: August 05, 2004 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is really deep. I LOVE IT!!!!! it really is great. kagome's new powers ROCK! i'd love to be able to do stuff like that. please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 19:57 CDT
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damn this thinger! it won't let me see my reviews!!!! WHYYYYY?!
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 18:11 CDT
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I soo love this story! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 18:15 CDT
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this is annoying i have to review my own story just to see my new reviews >
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 17:13 CDT
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That was so sad! Does Inuyasha have a split Personality? Is that it....then he should go to a therapist...but he just might end up killing them so nevermind. Anyway update soon.
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 22:06 CDT
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testing testing 1 2
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Reviewed By: LavenderRose66 On: July 28, 2004 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This last chapter was much harder to follow than the previous ones, I guess because I dove right into it instead of refreshing my memory like I should have. Otherwise, this is an interesting fic you're crafting, although it's really OOC. Just something to keep in mind when reading, that's all.
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