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| "New Destiny Reloaded - Book I: Roads to Succession" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: E-K On: November 09, 2008 06:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this, as well as the other "books," several times. While I enjoyed them, I find it disappointing that you never finished the series. In fact, in the time that I've kept up with your works, I find it really frustrating that you never seem to finish any of your stories. Why is this? I apologize for being so direct but I'm the kind of person who cannot stand to start reading something and not finish it. In any case, I digress. I did enjoy this series but something always bothered me about it. I couldn't figure it out until I recently rewatched the Ranma anime and it hit me. Why is Akane such a villain in this series? It's one thing for her to be angry with Ranma as she is in the series but it's taken to such a far extreme in this story as she continues to spit on Ranma's grave long after his death. She even goes so far as to spite her beloved family and marry Ranma's rival along her warpath against her dead fiancée. What could he have done to her to deserve so much and just what is Ryoga thinking to have gone along with this for so long? Maybe I'm looking too much into it, but while Akane has always been rough on Ranma, constantly assumes the worst of him, and blames him for every situation... That sounds really bad, doesn't it? Well, she still seemed like a sweet and sensitive girl, at least. Heh.
| Title: Fucc that!
Reviewed By: Koumi_Locc On: June 27, 2005 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fucc mimiato and Takmi fans foo!
| Reviewed By: penicks On: February 22, 2005 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
... Reloaded, huh? Well, it's definately been greatly improved from what I've seen. Keep it up and try to update often for the sake of my patience.
| Title: I forgot the Title
Reviewed By: BlueRag [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Koumi Fan cuz! Nice ficc..
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