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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: reesespbcup [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 18:30 CST
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Wow. That's all I can say. This has got to be the best-written story I have ever seen, and I'm not just sucking up. Very, VERY well done my friend. I just wish my story could be half as good as yours. But with the way you ended the chapter, a certain question raises in my mind: Is this the end? Please say it's not. But I do like the way you incorperated the title into the story, very nice. -Reese
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Reviewed By: DM On: November 02, 2004 20:37 CST
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Just came across this a few weeks ago, and I keep rereading it. Absolutely amazing. Looking forward to the sequel. Keep up the good work!
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Title: I am in awe...
Reviewed By: reesespbcup [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 14:43 CDT
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To be honest, I can't find a single flaw in your writing besides the tiny typoes here and there, which we all do, of course. Your newest chapter really hit me though in a way that the others didn't, and in a way that most stories about this topic choose not to portray. You're right, there are plenty of stren, untolerent people out there- in more ways than one- and we are all one of those people at some point in time. Almost all yuri or yaoi stories act as if everything is perfect once the two in the couple are sound with who they are- but they never show the outside world's point of view. I honestly think that outside tolerance is just as big, or bigger, of an issue to homosexual couples as their own personal troubles. Okay, I'm done rambling. Very nice job; each chapter seems to get progressively better. I know I've already given you a review, but I just seem to think that that last one didn't do you justice. Keep updating! -Reese
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Reviewed By: i have arms On: October 06, 2004 01:19 CDT
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another dazzling chapter, this one was really worth the wait. i'm glad you kept it as one chapter instead of dividing it into two, it fits much better this way. hmmm and the story continues! nice work, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Dazen On: September 27, 2004 19:09 CDT
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I'm going nuts over here! please update as soon as you can! ^^; you can shoot me later I promise you that lol *zooms off*
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Reviewed By: rebekah On: September 19, 2004 18:52 CDT
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please update soon I love this stories ra/st forever
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Reviewed By: reesespbcup [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. You've definitely done a very good job laying out the plot, and yet you kept my short attention span glued to your story from the very moment I looked at the first chapter. A fan and writer of Raven/Starfire yuri, I definitely think this is pure gold. Very well written. Please update soon! - Reeses
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Title: niiiiiiiiice!
Reviewed By: Dazen On: September 06, 2004 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fuc a lot and I hope that you updage it very soon, I really like the starfire and raven pairing and there are just not enough stories about them. ^_^ keep up the good work like I know you will and please update soon or face my crazy wrath! lol just kidding.
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Reviewed By: Zokoma [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been keeping up with your story and your updates are always one of the highlights in my day. Definitley good stuff, your writing is superb, except for some repetetive use of words. Maybe it's just me, but sometimes reusing the same words or phrases too often just takes a story down. Yeah, but keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm sure you're busy with your non-media miner related life, but us fans demand another chapter.
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Reviewed By: Blue Velvet On: July 30, 2004 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far turning into one of the best Teen Titans fanfics I've ever read. Great job!
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Title: good stuff
Reviewed By: publicart On: July 22, 2004 01:09 CDT
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wow good stuff, i like how you lay it out. I agree with the other reviewer(s) you really get the characters right, i can see it all playing out in my mind. And it gives off an emotion, that just really works with the story, yeah...very nice.
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Reviewed By: Relena Omoa-o-korosu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 21:08 CDT
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hey great fic so far. i really can't wait for the next one. it was wonderfully detailed and and wonderful style of your writing technique. keep up the wonderful fabulous work. i really can't wait to find out what the next chapy will be about
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Title: Good start
Reviewed By: Xenotra [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree with the previous review that you handily understand the TT world and the attitude that surrounds conversation. Plus, having Star use accurate voice so you can actually see her speaking can be hard to do, so bravo. I only wish Raven didn't so suddenly change from her dark muttering, I thought that shift would have taken longer.
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Reviewed By: Ur2 On: July 01, 2004 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this beginning very much. I cannot wait for the next chapter. I just love this couple, and you managed to capture the essence of TT. The characters, emotions, dialoge, and imagery were right on target. This could be just another episode in the series!
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