| "Unexpected Feelings 2" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Omega_Red9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic and I see a lot of potential in it. The shifting of views really kept me on my toes and allowed me to not be so judgemental of any single character. Needs a little bit more work on the work, but you warned me about that in the beginning so I guess that is my own damn fault. Nice job though, very entertaining. Keep up the writing. I would appretiate if you could do a review on one of my stories paying particularly close attention to my lemon chapters. I normally don't write them, but I thought my vindicated story could use them. Please, any help would be... well... helpful.
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Title: Unexpected Feelings 1/2
Reviewed By: Nessix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 04:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would love to read more of Unexpected Feelings 1/2. You got me addicted like people were of the old batman series. Rock on Man. Would love to see BB and Rob together again and more passionate. and maybe even a threesome if you like that sorta thing
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: Dark Rouge On: November 14, 2004 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that was such a good story! i loved how you were able to connect everything together. the details, the emotion, the deception, (although described very painfully) was excellent. you have a great talent, just work on your grammar, and you will have a great story to let the public know. i'm so glad i came acroos this fanfic. i hope to find more stories with your character and your enthusiasm.
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Title: grrrr
Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 22:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
grrrrrrrrrr... sure... stop there... u shall die for this!!! not relly... i might let george out... but only that... update... hurry!!! now see, that wasnt hard... i did it for u... now u... can do it for me... i reviewed... see... now do it!!! ok... um... buh by ^_^
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Reviewed By: ....b121.... On: July 07, 2004 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow great fic! i liked your first one of these 2 too! , in your stories you have a great mixture of comedy,embaresment,romance and a lot more , and another reason i liked this story is because im curently interested in this whole yaoi thing and i like the coupling , and i like the idea of ownly one of the two / well you know / f**cking the other sorry its just how i like reading this sorta things , so for the enjoiment factor im oviosly putting up a 10 , great story , one of the best ones i read so far and keep up the good work!.
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Reviewed By: lilonna_eternity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
NEVA EVA MAKE A YAOI FANFIC WIT ROBIN AND BEASTBOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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