| "Coin Toss" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Aloe Bose On: September 30, 2005 11:50 CDT
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yum ... what a wonderfully hot fic. And now I have something to think about while I clean the house ....
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Reviewed By: DarkChaosDawn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 09:13 CDT
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Great story. Definately one of my favorites. I thought that threesome was hot and sweet. Keep up the good work! Later, DCD
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: February 20, 2005 00:12 CST
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Why does it make mcg't(do not) into mcg't when I type it?
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: February 20, 2005 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Favorite it currently this! That made no sense! Oh well if I try to express my elation over this fic I might get hauled off to the place with padded walls so I will simply say, THIS IS GREAT I LOVE IT!!!! For a fanfic this was amazingly with some acutal plot-ish emotions. I mcg't care if Seto was out of character, in every fic in which he has a lover he is out of character. I've given up looking for one that has him in character even remotely all though you do a pretty good job with the whole 'lonliness' thing. I'll probably come back to reread the whole thing because it had a good lemon, nice pairings, and of course a wonderful plot. I just found two new pairing with Malik/Marik(which ever you prefer) one with Odion(suprised there aren't more) and one with...dun dun dun dun JOEY! Funny how I never saw how well Joey and Marik went together just like with Seto. Yes call me crazy; it gives the reporters something to talk about. Thanks for writing this I totally enjoyed it to the fullest and I can't wait for more of your stuff. Smile! And everything else I could say right now! Thank You. DK;) P.S. I agree with Somebody Else, there are way to many mangled PG versions of 'The Bet' and "puppy" has been abused. I've heard Yugi use it on some fics! Sorry for the long review keep writing so I mcg't go stir crazy in my room. Again THANK YOU SO MUCH! Somebody Else really knows their stuff I never would've pick up on that stuff! This is a choppy review I can't write worth beans!
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Reviewed By: mryn On: July 08, 2004 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn this was one HOTT! fic i just love seeing the three of temm together they are my fav 3sum..but my ultimate paing wuld have 2b seto/joey gotta love those 2 2gether but i will go fro the tristan/joey par'n also and maybe seto/tristan. well ja and keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 00:10 CDT
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What a delicious lemon! I love the idea of this threesom. As usual a very good story.
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 23:10 CDT
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Wow! I can't think of anything else lol it was hot, and such a happy ending :) Thanks for the great read!!!
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sobs* how sweet!!! He'll never be lonely again!! *hugs you* Oh, and boy was it HOT!! ---------------------------------------------- *stares at Somebody Else* it's a story honey, it's allowed to "not fit". Besides, who cares?
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Title: Just Some Advice
Reviewed By: Somebody Else [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 16:40 CDT
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Sorry. I ran out of space. OOps. And my paragraph breaks didn't show up... *is very irritated at this* Anyways, what I was saying is that the fanfic would have been enjoyable if it wasn't trying to be a fanfic. The enjoyment factor and overall rating are low because the characterization took so much from the overall story that it detracted from what was happening. Oh, and I would like say the citrus lube was a nice touch. ^__^
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Title: Just Some Advice
Reviewed By: Somebody Else [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all: Good grammar! I can't tell you how many fanfics there are that I can't even make my way through because every other word is spelled wrong and there are comma splices every other sentance. As for the rest, I like your writing style in general, but I consider charachterization to be a factor in this category so that's why you only get a 6; I felt everyone was out of character. First of all, one of the things Seto hates most about Jounouchi is his impulsiveness and the way he always takes gambles when he duels. Seto wouldn't have taken the bet in the first place, because he isn't the type to trust things to luck. Skepticism aside, Set wouldn't have taken a bet that was preseneted that way because it would be admiting he needed something from somebody else. All that aside, even if Seto did take (and lose) the bet, I really couldn't see him letting ANYONE call him baby without objecting even once. I also couldn't see him as letting anyone else think that they could get away with tricking him with a fake coin like that. There would be hell to pay if anyone tried that. I also think the "puppy" bit would probably piss jounouchi off, but that's been so abused I won't even go there. Which brings us to creativity. The whole "Well, let's make a bet and the loser gets fucked by the winner!" thing is actually something I've seen around kind of a lot. I've also seen an insane amount of PG variations. Overall, the fanfic would have been very enjoyable if it had just been |
Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 15:41 CDT
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I loved it!!! Please continue writing!
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