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Reviewed By: clutzoid15 On: August 16, 2007 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Got a notice for this so I re-read. Hoping a new chapter will be added soon!!! Want to see how their excursion goes.
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice to see Iruka doing something nice for Naruto even if he is grumbling about it at the time. How long will it take him to truly warm up to the boy?
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 06:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Some obvious spelling and grammar mistakes. Other than that a good start.
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Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 18:28 CST
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Hm....I wonder how Naruto changes Iruka's mind? *Wait for the next chapter*
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Reviewed By: not signed in, Katzztar On: December 06, 2004 12:16 CST
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Hmmm, interesting beginning. I look forward more on how Iruka changed his mind about Naruto. Interesting twist, making him a major hater in the past.
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Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 21:46 CDT
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Wow this is really good. A totally new spin on the Hidden Leaf and on Iruka. I am dying to see how you write this one up. cdk
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Reviewed By: darkestrose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I can tell it has a LOT of potential to be a great story! ^___^ Please update soon!
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