| "Hands on experience" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Legato On: October 28, 2004 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i always like Zell\Seifer fics. and i have to agree that using the condom does make it seem more real. i hope as you countinue you get Squall more involed in it. i cant wait to see the ending of this.*the grandfather is wicked creapy and yet hallarios, cant wait to see more of him, lol* good job
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Reviewed By: Forlorn Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 06:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic. Its funny,entertaining, and lemony sweet. I can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: monicaa On: August 22, 2004 17:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
good story! =] very funny
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Title: Hands on Experience
Reviewed By: Kiki-chan78 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 04:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the fact that Zell is insistant on using a condom. It adds a point of realism to the story. Now, if she had stated in the beginning that the characters were magically immune to all STDs, and that they are aware of this fact... then it would be something else completely. Keep up the great work!!!
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Reviewed By: Hyperion On: July 06, 2004 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyment was way down because of condom use. Yes, we all know about safe sex, but to bring it into fanfiction isn't for everyone. But it was a good read minus that.
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