| "Wake Me When Death Comes" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! you made me bawl. Bad you! Great story! but too sad.
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Title: I can't stop crying damn you.....
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 06:21 CST
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Update please, omg, I can feel my heart breaking for Dee...............*goes off to cry more*
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Reviewed By: firgodes7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice attention getter right from the start. Your story was very detailed that you could just seeing it unfold in your mind. This story was so powerful that I still get all misty eyed when I scan by it while looking at other fics. I beleive that you nailed the characters emotions right on the head. I cant wait to see what the next chapter will bring. I hope that you will update soon.
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Title: INTENSE! ! ! !
Reviewed By: OrionSun On: July 20, 2004 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell, this was INTENSE! Seen the title here for a couple of weeks, and it seem to always catch my eye, but I wasn't into reading it. Had nothing else to do today, and just decided I'd look to see what it was like. Man, it caught my attention up front, and I was hooked. Lots of intense emotion. I really think that you hit Dee's reaction on the head with this one. I am so glad I decided to read this. I will look forward to reading more when you do post again! Congrats!
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Title: PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: wakinyan (wakinyan_koa@yahoo.com) On: July 12, 2004 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, for GOD'S SAKE update soon!! I can't stress how much I need you to add another chapter! These images on this first chapter keeps running through my head! I need to have more than just the anguish of this one! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEEEEEASEEEE!!
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Title: Can't stop crying
Reviewed By: tertai On: July 12, 2004 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
From the summary I had a good idea of what this fic. contained. I didn't know if I could take that much angst. Portrait hit me pretty hard, but to lose one of them... I didn't know if I could stand it. Well, of course I broke down and read it. I can't stop crying! You really have a way to impact a blow with writing! This was a very emotional chapter. I believe it would be true to character also for Dee to react as he did. Poor Ryo...! If I could ask, why do you make your stories -- and I've only know of the two that you have -- that targets Ryo? I don't mean to say there's anything wrong with that. You're writing is fantastic! I was just wondering.
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Title: ........
Reviewed By: Devil666sc [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 12:54 CDT
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I love that stroy. i can't believe he died!!!! Poor dee poor Ryo. i love ryo and i love the way you write. it's so differnt but great. please post soon!! because i just love this story
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Title: Incredible
Reviewed By: Wildefyre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 02:06 CDT
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This fic is the most incredible story I have ever read... next to "Potrait Without Sin" of course. It grabs you right from the start and doesn't let you go. I can't remember the last time I cried so hard or for so long. Even after 2 days, I still found myself gripped by this. You put all of my works to utter shame! Now please update before I go insane!
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Title: No word to describe
Reviewed By: Neinusan (Not signed in) On: July 03, 2004 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know a word to describe this story. You really are a very intense author to create such moving and grasping themes. It's amazing just how you write to make a person feel so much... especially hurt that hits your in the gut and heart. I noticed that you said this was a trial, but I sincerely hope that you continue with this, no matter how dark it gets, I will be a faithful reader of your work.
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Reviewed By: ps On: July 01, 2004 10:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it, please up date quick.
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