| "The Summer of My Demon Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 15:29 CDT
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This story is so sad. Practically every chapter made me cry.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 03:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I with things would get better, how much more will she have to go through before somebody helps her? Then again I hear things like that help build strong determined character....
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Reviewed By: jc On: August 10, 2004 05:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story's coming along great, good plot too. Love it if u could update more or make longer chappies! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a fun, interesting, sad, but know it will get better soon story! I love your writing style, its not the same old thing! Wonderful!
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Reviewed By: BelleDayNight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 01:13 CDT
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Hehe...if I said 'update' I bet that would make you very unhappy. This is an amusing story. I feel really bad for Kagome having her father abuse her especially since he wasn't always that way. I look forward to her friendship blooming with Sesshou...this is based off a story? Who is the author? If you could email me and tell me I'd love to read the book. BelleDayNight@hotmail.com
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Title: Hi ya!!
Reviewed By: Frosts_Baby_Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 19:47 CDT
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I found you!! I'll read and review on Tues. but I just wanted you to know I am monitoring your stories now... Adios!! And say hi to Amanda for me...
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Reviewed By: sesshy_baby [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 13:11 CDT
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This is great! Very good story-Line thingy ^^ But I feel bad for Kagome...*Shakes fist at her father* YOU STUPID ASS-HOLE!!...Ahem...Sorry 'nout that ^^ I have my moments! Anyways even though I don't write stories and stuff (cuz I suck at writing!!) I completely agree that that must be annoying...Although I think I used to do it at one point in time..Or not...I can't remember ^^ Hee hee Anyways I just can't wait to see more of this story!! Good Job!!!! -Kag
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Reviewed By: Kanna On: July 31, 2004 22:48 CDT
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Thank you for updating! You did really good. I wish you would make the chapters a little longer though. But it doesn't matter as long as you keep up the good work! I have to say the comment on people just writing review was a little harsh, though true. Next time you insult someone don't make them feel so bad. It's not smart to insult reviewers they tend to stall or end their reviews when insulted. So if you do want them to do that make sure the insult is a good one. Now as much I want to write REVIEW just to annoy you I'm just going to say I hope you make successful progress. :D I bet if you knew where I lived you would kill me. Soooo I'll make sure not to tell you I live in ... just kidding I'm not that stupid! or am I?
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Reviewed By: Sesshiria [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 22:25 CDT
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I'm sorry, and I really don't mean to offend you, I just really have to say this before I actually type my review. Stop whining. You said you're getting about 20 reviews per chapter, and though you may not appreciate all of them you should at least be able to admit that that's a lot. I'm happy if I can get 20 reviews for five chapters. Like someone said: a lot of people don't review at all. If someone tells you to update that generally means that they like your story, and I'm sure they understand that you have other things to do. You should feel grateful you have that many people who like your story.... and now onto my actual review: I love this fic. Your style of writing is great and you've come up with an original idea which is extremely hard to pull of when working with such a popular source. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter, and, once again, I didn't mean to offend you, I simply needed to express my opinion.
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Reviewed By: sinead On: July 31, 2004 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great! were do u get the lyrics in your writings from? i luv them! keep writing!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: July 31, 2004 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish she could just run away...she mush fell so lonely. update a.s.a.p.
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Reviewed By: Kano_chan On: July 27, 2004 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there, GREAT ff!!!! I found your story very amusing and a little sad... amusing because of the interaction between kagome and sesshoumaru (I like the way you have pictured sessho a bit playfull ^_-)and sad because of how kagome is treated by her father grrrrrrrr...poor kaggy T-T ...can't wait to find what happen I'm imaging all sort of things .... argggggg pleaseeeee update soon (I hope I have not offended you by esorting you to update but i really couldn't stop me he eh eh eh ^__^) Bye Bye
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Title: Great!!!
Reviewed By: inuyashaslave [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 21:22 CDT
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I think its off to a great start please update soon!! I know how you feel when people just put update on their reviews. they could at least tell you if they liked it well i did so update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 09:24 CDT
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I totally agree. I hate it when people always write "UPDATE" it drives me insane. ::grabs bat and beats the computer:: anyways i love you story and i hope you update as soon as you can it was an awsome story and i want to know whats going to happen next. So whenever you can please finish. Now i have to go and finish writing my story. ::Mumbles under my breath:: Greedy people.
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Title: not one
Reviewed By: gale89 On: July 21, 2004 15:05 CDT
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to make amens for all the other reviews (and i use this term lightly) that you have recevied let me say i for one am sry because u r right u do have a life outside the computer u have responsabilitys (sp?) as well as the rest of us so thatnk u for putting forth ur time and effort so that we may enjoy ur creations and remember that when people write "UPDATE" its really a complement(sp?) and what theyre trying to say is thanku for writing what u have i love it and please update soon truly yours gale89
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