| "The Summer of My Demon Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: shinohakari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have a great story coming along and I hope you finish it soon
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Reviewed By: sesshyluvr On: July 20, 2004 13:04 CDT
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I'm sorry if you don't like it when people keep reviewing and saying UPDATE all the time, but we have lives as well, you know. You're not the only one with a limited amount of time on your hands. You should be thankful that people are taking the time to review, because most people don't. You should be more grateful. On that note, I do love your story and I can't wait to see where it goes. I feel so sorry for Kagome...to live such a tragic and broken life like that. Oh well. Hopefully Sesshomaru can help her out, and vice versa.
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: July 20, 2004 12:27 CDT
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I feel your pain. *twitches* I can't stand it when people keep threatening me to update . . . . I have a life most people don't seem to understand that though. Lovely story. I'd like to be his pet. *imagines being petted and pampered* Meow! =D
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Reviewed By: Silent Comet (too lazy to log in) On: July 20, 2004 11:31 CDT
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Oh I can't stand that either!! It does get very irritating when that is the only thing they have to say about your story... Anyway, I personally really like your story so far, the anger and fear has been done really well, if the father does seem a bit uber-evil. Just my opinion. Well, this is the part of the review where I normally get all cheerful and put in a smiley face and cheerfully suggest...well, you know what. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kanna On: July 20, 2004 11:27 CDT
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You have a nice story going so far. But why doesn't Kagome run away? I know she most likely is too proud to tell anyone. Well, every author has some image of Kagome and I hope to see how you will picture Kagome as. A girl with hopes of a rescuer saving her or someone who paves her own path? But no matter how you make her out to be it will be truely intresting. Now to make the normal reviewer's review-UPDATE uh please? To be more polite.
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Reviewed By: fanfic fanaticim a poet and i didnt know it [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i completely agree, idont like people just shouting UPDATE either. i always try to comment about the fic, unless my dad comes in and im supposed to be doing home work!^-^then i just write pleeze update and start sttuttering an excuse to my dad.anyway, ;ove the storyline, pleze update soon, fanfic fanaticim a poet and i didnt know it
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Reviewed By: MutelyMe22 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I thought your story was great! And I like the fact that Sesshomaru seems a bit more how shall I say...well playful. Looking forward to reading more chapters!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap! That whole author's note about people telling you to update was uncalled for. You should be glad that people want you to write more. We understand the you have a life because everybody else has a life too. It is also understood that you have to take the time to write it. You have a good story going and people telling you to update just means that they can't wait for the next chap to be put up. You take it the wrong way!
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Reviewed By: ditchertypepersonBUM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HERE HERE Interesting statement, but true. Being told update only says that people like it, not what is liked about the fic. still ike your stuff, should be interesting on how you combine the posistion of youki and humans with the romance, will there be an uprise and switch (or is it unswitch) or roles? Keep it up and looking forward to your next chapter. PS: I know about the life part and writing i work and then i have a dead brain, writing seems elusive when your beat. :P
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: July 19, 2004 23:16 CDT
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oh yes .. UPDATE! lol. =)
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: July 19, 2004 23:16 CDT
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so sad .. but it's a good story.
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Reviewed By: sesshyluvr On: July 19, 2004 21:54 CDT
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UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter and start of a story so please update soon please please please!!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for you to update!
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: July 01, 2004 15:55 CDT
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nice story so far, mohaha. i love kag/sess. =)
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