| "The Summer of My Demon Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sesshiria [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 22:25 CDT
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I'm sorry, and I really don't mean to offend you, I just really have to say this before I actually type my review. Stop whining. You said you're getting about 20 reviews per chapter, and though you may not appreciate all of them you should at least be able to admit that that's a lot. I'm happy if I can get 20 reviews for five chapters. Like someone said: a lot of people don't review at all. If someone tells you to update that generally means that they like your story, and I'm sure they understand that you have other things to do. You should feel grateful you have that many people who like your story.... and now onto my actual review: I love this fic. Your style of writing is great and you've come up with an original idea which is extremely hard to pull of when working with such a popular source. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter, and, once again, I didn't mean to offend you, I simply needed to express my opinion.
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Reviewed By: sinead On: July 31, 2004 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great! were do u get the lyrics in your writings from? i luv them! keep writing!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: July 31, 2004 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish she could just run away...she mush fell so lonely. update a.s.a.p.
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Reviewed By: Kano_chan On: July 27, 2004 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there, GREAT ff!!!! I found your story very amusing and a little sad... amusing because of the interaction between kagome and sesshoumaru (I like the way you have pictured sessho a bit playfull ^_-)and sad because of how kagome is treated by her father grrrrrrrr...poor kaggy T-T ...can't wait to find what happen I'm imaging all sort of things .... argggggg pleaseeeee update soon (I hope I have not offended you by esorting you to update but i really couldn't stop me he eh eh eh ^__^) Bye Bye
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Title: Great!!!
Reviewed By: inuyashaslave [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 21:22 CDT
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I think its off to a great start please update soon!! I know how you feel when people just put update on their reviews. they could at least tell you if they liked it well i did so update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 09:24 CDT
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I totally agree. I hate it when people always write "UPDATE" it drives me insane. ::grabs bat and beats the computer:: anyways i love you story and i hope you update as soon as you can it was an awsome story and i want to know whats going to happen next. So whenever you can please finish. Now i have to go and finish writing my story. ::Mumbles under my breath:: Greedy people.
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Title: not one
Reviewed By: gale89 On: July 21, 2004 15:05 CDT
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to make amens for all the other reviews (and i use this term lightly) that you have recevied let me say i for one am sry because u r right u do have a life outside the computer u have responsabilitys (sp?) as well as the rest of us so thatnk u for putting forth ur time and effort so that we may enjoy ur creations and remember that when people write "UPDATE" its really a complement(sp?) and what theyre trying to say is thanku for writing what u have i love it and please update soon truly yours gale89
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Reviewed By: shinohakari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have a great story coming along and I hope you finish it soon
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Reviewed By: sesshyluvr On: July 20, 2004 13:04 CDT
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I'm sorry if you don't like it when people keep reviewing and saying UPDATE all the time, but we have lives as well, you know. You're not the only one with a limited amount of time on your hands. You should be thankful that people are taking the time to review, because most people don't. You should be more grateful. On that note, I do love your story and I can't wait to see where it goes. I feel so sorry for Kagome...to live such a tragic and broken life like that. Oh well. Hopefully Sesshomaru can help her out, and vice versa.
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: July 20, 2004 12:27 CDT
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I feel your pain. *twitches* I can't stand it when people keep threatening me to update . . . . I have a life most people don't seem to understand that though. Lovely story. I'd like to be his pet. *imagines being petted and pampered* Meow! =D
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Reviewed By: Silent Comet (too lazy to log in) On: July 20, 2004 11:31 CDT
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Oh I can't stand that either!! It does get very irritating when that is the only thing they have to say about your story... Anyway, I personally really like your story so far, the anger and fear has been done really well, if the father does seem a bit uber-evil. Just my opinion. Well, this is the part of the review where I normally get all cheerful and put in a smiley face and cheerfully suggest...well, you know what. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kanna On: July 20, 2004 11:27 CDT
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You have a nice story going so far. But why doesn't Kagome run away? I know she most likely is too proud to tell anyone. Well, every author has some image of Kagome and I hope to see how you will picture Kagome as. A girl with hopes of a rescuer saving her or someone who paves her own path? But no matter how you make her out to be it will be truely intresting. Now to make the normal reviewer's review-UPDATE uh please? To be more polite.
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Reviewed By: fanfic fanaticim a poet and i didnt know it [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i completely agree, idont like people just shouting UPDATE either. i always try to comment about the fic, unless my dad comes in and im supposed to be doing home work!^-^then i just write pleeze update and start sttuttering an excuse to my dad.anyway, ;ove the storyline, pleze update soon, fanfic fanaticim a poet and i didnt know it
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Reviewed By: MutelyMe22 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I thought your story was great! And I like the fact that Sesshomaru seems a bit more how shall I say...well playful. Looking forward to reading more chapters!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap! That whole author's note about people telling you to update was uncalled for. You should be glad that people want you to write more. We understand the you have a life because everybody else has a life too. It is also understood that you have to take the time to write it. You have a good story going and people telling you to update just means that they can't wait for the next chap to be put up. You take it the wrong way!
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