| "Biology Vocab" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Title: O_o
Reviewed By: Jurei-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 14:14 PDT
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Dude! o_O;; I'm sorry if you all thought that my review was a flame! I didn't mean it like that at all! As to the story not being about Inuyasha, that wasn't my point. My only real concern was that none of the characters really kept their original personalities...also, the coupling wasn't labelled, which would definitely be a plus next time. (that way, if people aren't fans of the couple, they can avoid the story) As to that somewhat insulting remark by Lainey...I haven't been on this site for ages, and this account was made over two years ago. I'm actually 18, so the only real use I can think of for the so-called "sandbox" is to bury people up to their necks in it. And being a flamer is nothing to pride yourself on; reviews are meant to be CONSTRUCTIVE! I will give you points for creativity, though!^^ ~Juu
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Title: Please Continue!!!
Reviewed By: Phantomangel17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 19:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES PLEASE KEEP WRITINT THIS AND BITTEN!!!!!! Your stories are soooo good so please keep writing!! P.S. Could you write more Inu/Kag? And try some Kag/Koga, and Kag/Sess!!!
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Reviewed By: ktakn_yeni [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 22:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.... i THINK you're not a virgin right?? *laughs* this was the best LEMON i've ever read. even do the OOC. was very present, it didnt mind me at all. even though, i don't like the couple. i loooove inuyasha/kagome... you should do want of those, i would love to see them in action. please updateeee
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Title: YES!!
Reviewed By: ErehwonDreamer3013 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 13:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE ARISU-CHAN!! ADD MORE TO BITTEN!!! THANX YOU SO MUCH!! EREHWONDREAMER
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 01:44 PDT
Comment/Review:
write more for bitten!!! I loved that one!!!
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Title: Woot Woot
Reviewed By: XxTake me back somedayxX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 20:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes Yes Yes this was a very wonderful fic including the one before this one. I do think that you are a very wonderful write and such. This was a very enjoyable fic and I hope you make another fic like this cuz again you are a wonderful write keep up the great work. XxLaTeRxX
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Title: Kami Sama
Reviewed By: My Demented Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 12:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
((Bows down to you)) You are the greatest lemon writer.((smirks)) I really think that you should add more to Bitten, it was my favorite of all of your stories. This one, as well is unbelievable. From time to time, I make everyone I know read them and most of which, for a lack of a better statement to make without it sounding bad, need some sort of sex afterwards. I commend you ten fold on your one shots. Keep'em coming, and I was wandering that perhaps you write a Sesshy x InuYasha lemon? ((Looks up at you with curious eyes)). ~Shilley
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Reviewed By: alex [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 09:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! i think you should do a mir/kag/san then inuyasha wants to borrow kag then so a inu/kag/san! but now that i think about it Biganimefan1s idea for mir/inu/kag sounds great! Your an awsome writer keep up the great work. If i had a gold star id give you it! even tho im a big fan of inu/kag this was great. maybe it could turn out to be a kag/inu. ok ill shut up now (good job!)
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 22:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo please make kag inu and miro id really adpreciat it
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Title: Please
Reviewed By: Kary Asakura and Mimi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 22:02 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More threesomes please
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 20:27 PDT
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Oh yeah I loved Bitten it was great! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 19:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! And thankyou for writing a Miroku/Kagome/Kouga fic. Very well done with plenty of smut. Great Job ^__^. Since you mentioned Kagome saying Bringing Sango into the mix, will you be writing a chapter with Miroku/Kagome/Sango? Anyway, Keep up the great job ^____^
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Reviewed By: Hellkeeper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 19:44 PDT
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wooo i.. this is the most descriptive ones i have every read!!!! damn
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Reviewed By: Lainey [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 09:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! It's MY job to flame. Tsk, tsk, tsk. Next time you guys, leave it up to the master, BUT I must say...I didn't find anything worth flaming in this story. She labeled this as smut, and you should have been prepared for smut. Plus "Jurei-chan" apparently your 16. You shouldn't be reading this type of stuff. Maybe that's why you have a pg-13 fic and 1 review. Didn't your mother ever tell you "If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all." Go back to your sandbox. I can't wait for your next story!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*logged out* [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 20:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, albino and jurei chan need to kool it! if they dont like what\'s written they shouldnt read it. i mean its ur fanfic right? jurei said sumting about how it shouldnt be called inuyasha if it wasnt about him. well half the fics on this site arent about inuyasha! some ppl need to thnk about what they say before they say it or in this case write it. i highly doubt their grammer is as good as yours!!!! anyways enough about the stupid heads who wanna bring you down! now to the good stuff! you are a great writer i am amazed at how creative you are! you need to keep writing and i hope you write waaaaayyy more and make stories that arent one-shots. i would love it if you had made this into a story. you have a good style of writing and your spelling was superb! that poem at the end that kagome had written was great!!! pleeeasse keep writing and excuse my spelling errors because im tired and its late at night lol. lov ur work! ja ne! sexychicklet17
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