| "Biology Vocab" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 20:27 PDT
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Oh yeah I loved Bitten it was great! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 19:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! And thankyou for writing a Miroku/Kagome/Kouga fic. Very well done with plenty of smut. Great Job ^__^. Since you mentioned Kagome saying Bringing Sango into the mix, will you be writing a chapter with Miroku/Kagome/Sango? Anyway, Keep up the great job ^____^
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Reviewed By: Hellkeeper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 19:44 PDT
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wooo i.. this is the most descriptive ones i have every read!!!! damn
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Reviewed By: Lainey [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 09:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! It's MY job to flame. Tsk, tsk, tsk. Next time you guys, leave it up to the master, BUT I must say...I didn't find anything worth flaming in this story. She labeled this as smut, and you should have been prepared for smut. Plus "Jurei-chan" apparently your 16. You shouldn't be reading this type of stuff. Maybe that's why you have a pg-13 fic and 1 review. Didn't your mother ever tell you "If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all." Go back to your sandbox. I can't wait for your next story!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*logged out* [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 20:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, albino and jurei chan need to kool it! if they dont like what\'s written they shouldnt read it. i mean its ur fanfic right? jurei said sumting about how it shouldnt be called inuyasha if it wasnt about him. well half the fics on this site arent about inuyasha! some ppl need to thnk about what they say before they say it or in this case write it. i highly doubt their grammer is as good as yours!!!! anyways enough about the stupid heads who wanna bring you down! now to the good stuff! you are a great writer i am amazed at how creative you are! you need to keep writing and i hope you write waaaaayyy more and make stories that arent one-shots. i would love it if you had made this into a story. you have a good style of writing and your spelling was superb! that poem at the end that kagome had written was great!!! pleeeasse keep writing and excuse my spelling errors because im tired and its late at night lol. lov ur work! ja ne! sexychicklet17
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Title: Hmmm...
Reviewed By: Jurei-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 14:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you did warn that the story was smut, and I'd agree, it definitely was. Your style is okay, and your grammar is fine. However, this story, especially, borders on the edge of fanrape. Fanrape = basically, what you've done here...this story didn't have anything in common with the anime, other than the character names. They were all OOC, and pointlessly so. You might want to label it as either AU or original next time. Not a bad fic, but should definitely not be classified as Inuyasha if all you're going to keep from the anime is the names. After all, half of what we like about the series is the characters' PERSONALITIES. Ganbatte, ne? Keep trying to improve! ~Juu
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Title: Hmm...
Reviewed By: Jurei-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 14:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you did warn that the story was smut, and I\\\\\\\'d agree, it definitely was. Your style is okay, and your grammar is fine. However, this story, especially, borders on the edge of fanrape. Fanrape = basically, what you\\\\\\\'ve done here...this story didn\\\'t have anything in common with the anime, other than the character names. They were all OOC, and pointlessly so. You might want to label it as either AU or original next time. Not a bad fic, but should definitely not be classified as Inuyasha if all you\\\\\\\'re going to keep from the anime is the names. Ganbatte, ne? Keep trying to improve! ~Juu
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Reviewed By: lilkawaiigurl88 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 12:53 PDT
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I really like your stories. They are really good. Don't stop writing, because your stories are GREAT! DO NOT LISTEN TO A CERTAIN FLAMER BECAUSE THEY ARE WRONG!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 17:24 PDT
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Title: HOLY SCHMOLY!
Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 19:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP! That was so awesome, I just can't even...UGH! Oh, I just loved it. Probably the best emon I have ver read, and mind you I have read soem good ones, but if you made that into a like a real tsory with more than just that chapter, I would be so happy. BUt then again, sometimes it's better to leave good stuff alone. And that my friend, WAS GREAT~! Good, job.
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Reviewed By: Anne_WritinAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 16:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY MORE MORE! Nice smut! hehe...anywaz it made the story even better when i found out it was Miroku...
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 16:02 PDT
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I sooo LOVE your stories! Write more please?
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 15:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOO I LOVE IT PLEASE MAKE MORE WITH KAG AND INU OR KAG INU AND MIRO
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 09:15 PDT
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Yay for smut! At first, I thought it was just a random teacher, but now.... I was surprised it was Miroku. And Albino Elf, if you don't like the stories, don't read them. No one is forcing you to read them. How would you like it if you wrote something then someone came along and said "Hey, this sucks so bad, your writing sucks so bad" You wouldn't like it, would you? Arisu-chan, ignore the flamer. I really like your stories.
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Reviewed By: Albino Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 00:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nothing about your stories is sexy. I find them to be quite offense. I mean do honestly I think you watch way to much porn because that\\\\\\\'s all your stories are. Not written well at not!!! DISGUSTING!!!!!!!!!!
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