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| "The Great Pokemon Race" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] | Reviewed By: Scary-red-eyes On: July 16, 2005 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally!!!! You updated! Thank you! Anyway, It's a shame Sunamii didn't win, but *Shrug* oh well. Can't win them all. :D Update a little sooner, pelase(?) :)
| Reviewed By: Scary-red-eyes On: August 07, 2004 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^o^ YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTH ANKYOUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!! #I wonn, I wonIwonIwonnn!# Thank you!!!!!!! YOU'RE MY FAVORITE PERSON ON THE NET!!!!! Can't wait for my Sunamii to go up! Probably won't win, but hey! (Oh, ps. Sunamii is my favorite, so I'll probably cheer for it wherever it is in the race!)
| Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so great and i loved it though i wish i won darn you owell it was so funny at some points and wright soon i want to see what happenhs next please please please hurry
| Title: BUTTERED TOAST!!! And a review. ^^
Reviewed By: ED (or Shi-Rauko) On: August 01, 2004 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! NOT BLAAAAAAAAAAZE!!! That's why I'm giving you a 1!!! Because you killed Blaze! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Even though I wanted Blaze to die... MWAHAHAHAHA!!!! Anyway, good chapter. ^^ Yeah.
| Title: My name
Reviewed By: Dragon_of_1000_Lands [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 10:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry. I forgot about what you should call me. Well, I din't have any room in the last review so here it is: Call DoL (with that exact spellind, pronounced DOLE (like the Banana))
| Title: My PKMN 4 the races
Reviewed By: Dragon_of_1000_Lands [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 14:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just so you know, I only wanna enter in the FIRE, DARK, and DRAGON races. So... #1 (Fire Race): Xeythor (Types: FIRE/GRASS) - Genderless (sorry) - Basic Moves: FIRE BLAST; LEAF BLADE; EARTHQUAKE (o.O); RAINY DAY (Makes no sense to me, but hey!) - Ball: Level Ball - Color: Regular Colors, but it's RED and GREEN. - Cheat Strategy: RAINY DAY changes the weather, so That's used, along w/ EARTHQUAKE #2 (Dark Race): Scizor (I'll explain in a bit.) - Female - BASIC MOVES: BEAT UP; METAL CLAW; SHADOW BALL; STEEL WING - Ball: Ultra Ball - Cheat Strategy: Well, My Scizor has been Genetically Modified, makinging it a STEEL/BUG/DARK hybrid. (Hey, you left this one WIDE open.) #3 (Dragon Race): Rayquaza (Nickname: RA)- Genderless - Basic Moves: HYPER BEAM; ICE BEAM; CRUNCH; AURORA BEAM. Ball: Poké Ball (o.O) - Cheat Strategy: Here we go. Dragons are weak vs Ice, so Ice and Aurora Beams will be used at the starting line (1 each) against each Pokemon. Next, Crunch will catch Physical Attacks against me. Then, Hyper Beam can be used (Up to 5 times), but having to recharge, it has been equipped with a hidden Power-Up case. Also, It has a mini head set so it can hear me throughout the race (I'm not with it...) and I'll also have a map. Then I will tell it where to go. Rayquaza will cut every corner, slam the ground with its tail, destroy any bridges, sideswipe other racers, and to some, it'll grab them, fly into the air, and HYPER BEAM them to the next county. That's about all. Seeya
| Title: oops
Reviewed By: Dark kitsune On: July 06, 2004 10:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooop sorry bout that
| Title: hey
Reviewed By: DarkFoxRyouko On: July 06, 2004 10:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
NAME: Ryouko LOOKS: Black shoulder length hair with red tips cut in layers, dark-ish blue eyes (like May), wearing a black tanktop with a picture of a red cross curved at the corners in the middles with gray baggy jeans showing my mid section, a black belt with two small chains hanging off the right side, black gloves with the finger part cut out, and a red headband. POKEMON: 1)electric:Pikachu-boy-thunder, thunder bolt, agility, quick attack-regular poke-ball, 2)fire: Quilava-boy-flame thrower, quick attack, flame wheel, headbut-poke-ball 3)water: Golduck-boy-surf, confusion, disable, water gun-great-ball(the rest are in great-balls) 4)flying: Tiallow-boy-fly, wing attack, double team, quick attack, gust, 5)dark: haunter-boy-shadow ball, night shade, hypnosis, dream eater, 5)dragon: charizard-boy-flame thrower, rage, slash, tackle. (sorry for the misspelling bye ^_^u)
| Title: hey
Reviewed By: Dark kitsune On: July 06, 2004 10:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
NAME: Ryouko LOOKS: Black shoulder length hair with red tips cut in layers, dark-ish blue eyes (like May), wearing a black tanktop with a picture of a red cross curved at the corners in the middles with gray baggy jeans showing my mid section, a black belt with two small chains hanging off the right side, black gloves with the finger part cut out, and a red headband. POKEMON: 1)electric:Pikachu-boy-thunder, thunder bolt, agility, quick attack-regular poke-ball, 2)fire: Quilava-boy-flame thrower, quick attack, flame wheel, headbut-poke-ball 3)water: Golduck-boy-surf, confusion, disable, water gun-great-ball(the rest are in great-balls) 4)flying: Tiallow-boy-fly, wing attack, double team, quick attack, gust, 5)dark: haunter-boy-shadow ball, night shade, hypnosis, dream eater, 5)dragon: charizard-boy-flame thrower, rage, slash, tackle. (sorry for the misspelling bye ^_^u)
| Reviewed By: Scary-red-eyes On: July 05, 2004 13:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ps, I wear a blue t-shirt, blue shorts, blue hair, blue backpack, blue bandana, blue eyes and I tell each pokemon to do a certain thing, if that's allowed. If not, I tell them to leap-frog their opponents.
| Title: No copying off yours
Reviewed By: Scary-red-eyes On: July 05, 2004 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. Fire:Quilava,Male,Fire spin,flamethrower,acid armour,quick attack,Pokeball,Blaze,Normal,leapfrog opponents. Water:Swampert,Male,Dive,surf,Dynamic punch,Waterfall,Heavy-ball,Sunamii,Normal,punches opponents. Electric:Manectric,Female,Zap cannon,thundershock,flash,rage,Fast-ball,Spark,opposite colours,blinds opponents with flash Dark:Absol,Male,Swords dance,Fury swipes,Nightshade,shadow ball,Great-ball,Yingyang,normal,Trips opponents up Flying:Taillow,Female,Peck,Glare,Wing attack,Whirlwind,Poke-ball,None,Normal,Blows out fire with whirlwind Dragon:Dragonair,Female,Sing,Dig,Hypnosis,Double team,Ultra-ball,None,Normal,puts opponents to sleep in any way Trainer: Mareo. ^_^ Plese enter me!
| Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 03:04 CDT
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Name:AngelPOkemon Fire:Rapidash Moves:fire spin, stomp, ember, fire beam (basicly an attack of pure fire like a laser really cool just try not to get hit by it)Nickname:Salem Water:Vedra (a mermaid looking pokemon its tail fin is green mixed with blue) Moves:water gun, charm (she basicly makes the pokemon fall in love with her via spell kinda thing),thunder water(she has a attack that just mixes thunder and water), bubble Nickanema:Kita elictricity:Incor (a pokemon that looks a lot like rapidash except where theres fire on rapidash electricty on this one) Moves:Thunder bolt,Lightning stomp (just stomp with elictricty mixed in), stomp, thunder storm (can call down thunder i mean like a thunder storm with many bolts at a time) Nickname: Sade Dark:Haunter Moves: nightshade, hypnoses, dream eater, nightmare Nickname: Kirnm Flying:Articuno Moves:ice beam, wing attack, gust, snow storm Nickname:Isis Dragon:Geto (it looks like a normal really big Dragon Black with what looks like purple flames on it) Moves:Night beam (its a beam of darkness that can really hurt pokemon), ice beam, soler beam, fire beam Nickname: Getso What i look like:black hair always in braid crystal blue eyes Clothes:all black leather pants tank top and black jacket that stops just below my breast fighting gloves and black shoes My cheat stratigy: i can cominicate with all my pokemon telepathicly and know where they are whats happining where to go im Female as well are all my pokemon pokeballs:all normall
| Title: Um... KETCHUP!!!
Reviewed By: Shi-Rauko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Ed (MOH) PKMN: Fire: Blaziken (boy) Nick-Blaze Moves: Blaze Kick, Mirror Move, Slash, Sky Uppercut Ball: Luxury Ball Electric: Pichu (girl) Nick-Spark Moves: Thunder, Thundershock, Sweet Kiss, Headbutt Ball: Friend Ball Water: Milotic (girl) Nick-Melody Moves: Hydro Pump, Water Pulse, Blizzard, Recover Ball: Net Ball Dark: Absol (girl) Nick-Nightmare Moves: Razor Wind, Faint Attack, Slash, Perish Song Ball: Luxury Ball Fly: Lugia (NA) Nick-Silverwing Moves: Aeroblast, Ancientpower, Psychic, Fly Ball: Master Ball Dragon: Latias (girl) Nick-Ed Moves: Solarbeam, Ice Beam, Psychic, Mist Ball Ball: Ultra Ball Cheat: little microphones in PKMN's ears to tell them where to go and what to do; also encourage and give them directions if lost; command battle moves; also uses tracker to know where PKMN are at all times. Yep! That's it! And I didn't run out of space! WOOO!!! -.-!!! Oki, gotta go... actually... I'll use up the rest of the space!!! With... RANDOM SYMBOLS!!! Bye! ^.^ slkfjwer-082-9521519027u]`-080v897yt8934t [p0i(*^#_T#%)#(&%#JNHRS{)ITQ|QOIY#LKQ%KG&*#PWT)(��)*&GH() E*WT&WE(T&QAWas05987089734y9fsd48734uiiu&*&*&*&)*$% JIE*(YQW:KuROI$&%Q^#)($&(UG THE SETO KAIBA CATAPULT CHAIR... LAUNCH YOUR BIG BRO IN THE AIR!!! ...yeah... WARNING: May cause cuncussion to victim and unwanted hole in ceilings. WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
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