| "Then and Now" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: foxgirl94 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 18:39 CST
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update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.updat e.update.update.update.update.update.
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
get a muse. tht might help. u no somone to hlep with ur story. keep up the good work^_~
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Reviewed By: Kang_lin88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 16:38 CDT
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for chapter 4 ohaiyo is only used for the morning,and since it was dinner time Shippo was supposed to say konbanwa. And you had Kurama reffer twice to knowing Sesshoumaru, that was a little confusing.
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Title: Blah
Reviewed By: Tierastriel On: June 06, 2005 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
font color="ooohhhh!!I know!Somehow Youko should get in control and transform into his body!Then Sess runs into them !The Youko and Kurama keep switching personas!^o^But u dont have to take my idea its your story!I love it when Kurama smirks!So funny!Thou I find almost everything funny now days...">Font Color
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Title: Blah
Reviewed By: Tierastriel On: June 06, 2005 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
font color="Ha!I can imagin Sesshomaruu with one ar wrapped around Youkos neck and doing the peace sign in the other!Love the way you make this such a comedy,*in my opinion atleast*">Font Color
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Reviewed By: wynter89(mm) On: May 20, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you kind of repeated the question on "who is inu yasha and who sesshomaru is" other wise i really like it, surpised that inu didnt put up more of a fight. as for sugestions i would love to help, but i dont know were you want to continue on with the fic. email me and tell me what you want to do and i will think of something. (that is if you want) wynter89@rogers.com is my email. email me if you want any of my two cents
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 17:51 CDT
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Hmmm just as an afterthought ... in chapter 4 Kurama expresses surprise at hearing Kagome knows Sesshomaru TWICE...... maybe you should fix it.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hang on a sec ......... okay there. All added to my favorites list. I have to wonder though ..... Where is Kurama's ever present shadow, also called Hiei? I thought they were pretty much glued at the hip. Oh well, Just had to say that I would like to see an update soon. JA NE!
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Title: then and now
Reviewed By: cute but psycho girl On: May 09, 2005 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz pzl pzl update soon plz. this is the first kurama/kagome story ive ever read and its really really good. :) :) :) :)
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Title: chapter 7
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 06:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Update again soon.
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 16:12 CST
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lol
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Reviewed By: Phalon22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 01:14 CST
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Totally kewl. Though gross on Inuyasha & Kikyou's part. This is a really great story. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT !!! I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Unreal
Reviewed By: kikitravel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 12:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think you put a lot of thought into this fic. Afterall, who would go blurting about that they are a demon or travel through time? And especially to a stranger! You think that they would some SOME restraint in keeping it a secret. Aiya...
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: February 06, 2005 18:11 CST
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cute, I liked that line where he said I found you didn't I? ^^
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