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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 13:43 CST
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this is such a good story, i cant believe that inuyasha actually said that he really needs to grow up. when are kagome and kurama going to tell sesshy about being from the future? he has to know so he doesnt tell past yoko anything about what happens later on.
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Title: Chapter11
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Update again soon. Can't wait to read what happens with Kikyou, if Inuyasha finds some one else (Yukina, or even Sango) and how they defeat both Naraku and Kikyou.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 02:33 CDT
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Poor Kagome.... Well, please update.
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Title: Then And Now
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 22:19 CDT
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AWWWWWWWWWWW!!! That was so cute, and really good, and fluffy, and sweet, and the end kinda made my eyes go outta focus there for a second.... lol... don't know why though... wish i did, but sadly I don't. Well got practice tomorrow so Update soon and c ya later! lol
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 23:52 CDT
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uhhh... o...k... Please update when you have ideas and the time.
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Reviewed By: mindfreak [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 16:29 CDT
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mmmmk. I really like this one...yea. update soon. btw: does sesshoumaru get hiei? they would make a great pairing...hmmmm....hey, i could write that type of story...there's only one way to find out. lol. Again, update soon!
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. Update again soon. Can't wait to see what Inuyasha does about Kikyou, if you pair Sango and Inuyasha or Sango and Hiei.
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Reviewed By: C-A-S-S-I-E [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I loved it.Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kagome4Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 09:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you finally updated. It's been forever.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 13:21 CDT
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YAY
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. UPdate again soon. Can't wait to read what Sesshomaru wants with Kurama and Kagome, what Inuyasha thinks about Kikyou's betrayal and what happens with everyone.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 14:13 CDT
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Cool^^ Plz update :3
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Reviewed By: Kagome4Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is truly good. I hope you update in the future
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Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: yusuke_kagome_yoko_4ever_31 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"ooohhhh!!I know!Somehow Youko should get in control and transform into his body!Then Sess runs into them !The Youko and Kurama keep switching personas!^o^But u dont have to take my idea its your story!I love it when Kurama smirks!So funny!Thou I find almost everything funny now days..."
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Reviewed By: foxgirl94 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 18:39 CST
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update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.updat e.update.update.update.update.update.
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
get a muse. tht might help. u no somone to hlep with ur story. keep up the good work^_~
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Reviewed By: Kang_lin88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 16:38 CDT
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for chapter 4 ohaiyo is only used for the morning,and since it was dinner time Shippo was supposed to say konbanwa. And you had Kurama reffer twice to knowing Sesshoumaru, that was a little confusing.
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Title: Blah
Reviewed By: Tierastriel On: June 06, 2005 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Blah
Reviewed By: Tierastriel On: June 06, 2005 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
font color="Ha!I can imagin Sesshomaruu with one ar wrapped around Youkos neck and doing the peace sign in the other!Love the way you make this such a comedy,*in my opinion atleast*">Font Color
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Reviewed By: wynter89(mm) On: May 20, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you kind of repeated the question on "who is inu yasha and who sesshomaru is" other wise i really like it, surpised that inu didnt put up more of a fight. as for sugestions i would love to help, but i dont know were you want to continue on with the fic. email me and tell me what you want to do and i will think of something. (that is if you want) wynter89@rogers.com is my email. email me if you want any of my two cents
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 17:51 CDT
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Hmmm just as an afterthought ... in chapter 4 Kurama expresses surprise at hearing Kagome knows Sesshomaru TWICE...... maybe you should fix it.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hang on a sec ......... okay there. All added to my favorites list. I have to wonder though ..... Where is Kurama's ever present shadow, also called Hiei? I thought they were pretty much glued at the hip. Oh well, Just had to say that I would like to see an update soon. JA NE!
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Title: then and now
Reviewed By: cute but psycho girl On: May 09, 2005 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz pzl pzl update soon plz. this is the first kurama/kagome story ive ever read and its really really good. :) :) :) :)
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Title: chapter 7
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 06:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Update again soon.
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 16:12 CST
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lol
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Reviewed By: Phalon22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 01:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Totally kewl. Though gross on Inuyasha & Kikyou's part. This is a really great story. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT !!! I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Unreal
Reviewed By: kikitravel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 12:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think you put a lot of thought into this fic. Afterall, who would go blurting about that they are a demon or travel through time? And especially to a stranger! You think that they would some SOME restraint in keeping it a secret. Aiya...
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: February 06, 2005 18:11 CST
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cute, I liked that line where he said I found you didn't I? ^^
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